This story is very interesting

Determination? Flower? Undertale?

*clapping * this was good! Honestly really good! You should post it on other sites like on archiveofourown or whatpad, there aren't many cool stories of this Fandom there

Nhe I think I prefer this epilogue over the other one. At least on this everyone is happy, not just the loud family from C1-37.
Yes,Lincon has a new home and a new gender but as she said the loud boys need her as much as she needed the loud girls.

No it was pretty accurate. Minus the throwing up part, I've never felt the need to throw up while on my period though the cramps are really horrible.
In my case, I have greasy skin so my period often comes with a bad case of acne for free! Oh joy
Seriously, be glad you're a dude!

Respect the Neon Flash reference

This is the 2nd best fanfic I ever read
Sorry for my english, I speak spanish

This fanfic has to undeniably be one of the greatest I have ever read. The primary reason I love this fanfic is because it makes the Loud Brothers actual characters, and not just offensive stereotypes or just the same character with the only difference being their genders. I appreciate how you make them different from their female counterparts in ways that sync with them being guys. And I especially love how they've developed over the course of time.

Well, I finally made it. 300,000 words later. I meant to review this a while back, but those plans fell to the slipside as I felt that a simple "Good job, bro" wasn't good enough for one of the longest stories in our archive. Ironically it was a post off-site that got me motivated enough to do it... So I'm here to finally give my thoughts.

Let me just start with this; I liked it. I liked it a lot. There. If you don't feel like reading the rest, I enjoyed it very much.

Alright; let's begin...
So, for some bizarre reason, I've always had a fond attachment to the genderbent world. The Dimension 63, if you will. I don't why, but characters like Linka and Loki and Lars just jump out at me, and i love seeing them and reading about them. So there was an inherent draw right there. And I must say, the way these characters were handled was superb. Outside of the incident, Lynn Jr. being into ballet and Lars standing in for the author were nice touches (especially that part at the beginning about the story of the dying kid haha)

But then the incident happens, and a lot of characterization goes back to that event. Linka becomes the person she is today; more selfish and vile and downright cruel, while Lynn Sr. becomes more gruff and aggressive and controlling, demanding his children look after his only daughter and, to an extent, destroying her life. And... just poor Lane.

Outside of them, you gave us the lovable Ron Andy and the humorous Chris. I'll never forget all the crazy things that poor boy saw on his screen...

Okay, so outside of that, we have the large and momentous story; one that tries to balance a slice-of-life sister bonding (err, brother bonding) aesthetic like the show, while also infusing a creeping science fantasy subplot that ends up exploding in the character's faces. I think, for the most part, it does this well. It's well established earlier on by the visits on Cryptos, and I'd argue in the very DNA. After all, a story about a body-swapping kid from another world is probably going to have some of those moments. So it isn't jarring or out of nowhere when anomaly hunters arrive, or when Levi pulls out some great machines, or anything along those lines.
And the chapters about the bonding were great. I loved the way Lincoln really cared for his new brothers and friends/enemies (in the case of Chandler) in this new world, and how he did his best to connect with them, and help them with their various problems. It's true, he really was a better Linka to them than the actual Linka. But he still retained that love for his sisters, and a desire to return to his own home that I just had to choose that one out of the different endings.

As for the other side of the story... I just loved the universe you built. Not just genderbent D63, but the entire shebang: anomalies and anomaly hunters, the many versions of our beloved Loud family, the fragments, Glados, and of course the infinite universes. It feels like there's so much going on, so much to explore and explain. It's a fun scifi romp, one of the best on this site.

Small note, but Linka dating Clyde... nice heh.

One final note; the longevity of it all. I'm very impressed you could keep a story up for what could equate to a novel trilogy/series, I'm very impressed with the length of the chapters and how you managed to get most of them done by the method you mentioned... I'm just impressed all-together. Perhaps, though, the length was a bit of a hindrance, as typos and grammatical errors and wrong tenses cropped up occasionally. But, with the story that those words were telling, it was easy to forget about them and just enjoy stories and tales of Lincoln solving the problem of magic wifi, Linka getting her just comeuppance, Linka and Lynn getting a little frisky in Glados visions ;)

And, it's worth mentioning my gratitude to the people who helped you. I think it's fair to give them a little glory; they did an amazing job beta-reading and suggesting enjoyable plots and ideas for us to enjoy. So if Exotos, Wolvenstrom, Sunblast-X or Insane Master Writer Studio is reading this; good job.

Well, that wraps up my review (I'm a little tired, honestly heh). Amazing job with this, overall.

Dimension sixty three is awesome!

Cheesy, but the good sort that has made the Yu-Gi-Oh anime memorable.

The parts where the Loud sisters and brothers protected Lincoln from Trevor was just AWESOME as it was touching.

Wow. This chapter was just EPIC.

Thanks for choosing Yu-Gi-Oh and not Pokémon, like most people would. I've been a longtime fan of the franchise, and overall am glad to see the game get its chance to shine. Srsly, thx!

LOVED the Gravity Falls cameo! Simply LOVED IT!