I adore this story! I remember reading it when it first came out and I stumbled across it at the start of lockdown and have been reading it again and wow it’s only gotten better! I love that it’s a slow burn and really goes into the character and the way you’re dealing with everything is just incredible. I really really really hope Doug and Evie get together like the films but I think Carlos and Chad would be a really sweet pairing in the future - also I wouldn’t be mad if Audrey and Mal ended up together! I can’t wait to read more and see what you happens next!

... .God. Are you making mal...lesbian?
WHY...

I can see it now, Carlos, I am your father.

This just determines it.I’m almost sure Carlos’s father is amending those letters

I just binge read this for the second time. I love this story and I really hope you put in more of Evie POV/her using magic/her story! The way you write the characters is so well done and I would love more Jay and Evie interaction! Whether platonic or romantic I just they they have such and interesting dynamic!

Hey! I’m re-reading this and was wondering why the VKs won’t eat apples? Thanks!
-Tori

WOW. This. Is. So. Amazing. I found this fanfic a few days ago and since then I’ve been staying up till 2am trying to get to the end. I love how you’ve really explored the darkness of Descendants in a way that Disney never would. Your portrayals of the character are perfect. I especially like what you’ve done with Jay and Carlos and would love to see more of that. I really hope you update soon! (I’m not logged in here so you can just call me Tori)

This is cool

very interesting chapter. reread the story just for fun and I'm super excited to see where you take this. what will happen to the core four after meeting Carlos father? how will the meeting with queen Elsa go? so many questions! I look forward to your next update!

God, I love this. I started reading 2 days ago, and I'm supposed to be doing a truckload of work but instead, I've been reading because it's so good! I love how you pay equal attention to all of the characters, so many fics only center on like, one or two of the main four. I feel like Jay and Evie especially get left out a lot, so I love that you included them. I actually haven't watched the movies or the Once Upon a Time series, but I don't feel like I need to watch them to understand the plotline, which is amazing. I love your additions to everything, like with the gangs, and all the other side characters. I love Aziz, and I think he's a great addition as a more main character. I can't wait for the next update, and I love the size of the updates. This is amazing!

I normally dont eave reviews seen but loving the way carlos challenges him

I absolutely love this fanfiction! It is so well written and I just binged this whole thing in the last three days. This is so good and I can’t express how absolutely amazing this is. I can’t wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!

I love this so much! This is literally the best descendants fanfiction I have read! I absolutely love the vks bond and Carlos’s stutter! By the way, I have a stutter and I think that you did very good job writing Carlos’s stutter. This is so well written and I am love with this story! Keep up the good work!

I just found this story and read it all in a day. I love what you have done with the characters but I wish you would do more Evie POV and maybe a little more Jay, at the end he had more so it was better! Anyways please update soon, you are truly talented.

First of all, I just wanted to say wow. This story is truly incredible and one of my favorite fan fictions I have ever read. I remember coming across it a year or so ago and being so disappointed that it was apparently abandoned and I was so overjoyed to find that you had updated again! I loved rereading every bit of it and noticing things I had missed the first time and getting to fall in love with these characters all over again. Your takes on everyone are just wonderful and I can’t stress enough how much I love this story. Your writing style is engaging, your characters complex and fascinating, your backstories fascinating but not too much, and i loved how you tackled serious issues respectfully and carefully. I can’t wait to see where else this story goes! Thank you for sharing this, you’ve made one reader very very proud.