This was a great story! So much action! I really enjoyed it. Great work!

Very good beginning.

That was a nice ending and good to see no deja vu of what happened to Sam in "W.O.W." as well. 10/10 to me. :)

Nice flow in chapter 1. Nice to see old villains back, too. Looking forward to ch.2. :)

Fun adventure this one. Perhaps resolved a little too quickly and easily, but very well written and structured. Nice that the story regarding Ariel from 'W.O.W.' has been resolved and Stacy's redemption was a nice touch too. :)

Nice. I searched everywhere for a FanFic that featured Ariel.

I was glad Alex was able to win her fight and act so compassionate after. I am glad none of them actually submitted to the mind control. Did I understand that correctly that Wink was related to Stacy? Didn't know that probably because of being cannon blind. Anyway, this was a good story. Good job.

Wink is an interesting villain. It sounds like he is selling some items that would be very dangerous if they actually worked and fell into the wrong hands. I am glad Stacy doesn’t want any part of a continued criminal path. The assignment they gave Alex, yikes. I hope she doesn’t get hurt in the competition. Sounds like an interesting set up, good chapter.

I really liked Alex in this chapter. Her enthusiasm and funny personality, you got her characterization right! "Don't jinx it!" hahahahaha

Glad to see you addessing Clover conflict about trusting Stacy, and in the end, Stacy's hairpin protected Clover. Once again, I liked the way you handled the trust issues, with a guard still watching Stacy, and Clover reluctant about hugging her.

Great story!

I liked the idea of multiple villains working together, like Wink and Ariel.

Ariel's introduction was aexcellent, you gave us a brief description (athletic-looking woman with black hair), her backstory (Her prior crime of mind controlling scores of women in an attempt to eradicate men), and showed there was a score to settle between her and the spies (She was the one villain who eluded capture and she said she'd return again with another scheme).

Stacey had a nice introduction too, I really get the feel she wants to reform, and it was a real nice touch to have one of the Spies - Clover - not trusting her immediately. I really dislike when writers redeem a character without consequences, I like a redemption being handled in a realistic way, and I feel you did that well.

The only character I feel could have been more developed here is Wink. I think the scene starting with "Wink was seated at his desk" you could have expanded a bit on his past actions from the show and how he ended up doing what he is doing now.

Alex's reaction to the news she was competing was quite fun xD

Aaah, so the hairpins from Alternative Care are from Stacey ... Nice!

Nice story and excellent mission! I almost forgot about Ariel, so excellent choice of villain. The story flowed well and was a nice read.

Well done.

Awesome.

Love it.