Awe! Adorably sweet!

Sweet story!

Lovely and sweet and another good reason to burn the pancakes. Thanks for sharing.

Cute story! ... but if Emma really wanted to be with Killian and knew how he felt about her why would she let him continue to assume for years that she had romantic feelings for his brother, who also knew how Killian felt about Emma?! The ending is wrong, Emma was the idiot not Killian.

Interesting twist!

This was cute. David wondering how Emma makes the batter was adorable. He was not thrilled to get the rest of the story from MM though! Killian will be sure to follow up with Emma about her mom's key I bet.

Awh this is just too sweet. Xx

I am glad she could hear him, and would stop thinking that he ran. Frustrating that he couldn't hear her, but there's more to come...thanks for writing,

Lovely to see a conversation about David's father and Killian's responsibility for his death. That was a shock, and it would take time to process and forgive. Glad they talked.

Love love love love love. I laughed so much!

Oh my goodness! Loved this. Haha Snow definitely needed a night out! Xx

Feeeeeeeels. Gah xx

Gahhhh xx these two just give me all the feels. Xx

Weelllllll this made me cry. Brilliant love! Xx

Love love love Emma's introspective here. Well done! Xx