This was amazing!
It was emotional and wow, that made me feel so many things!
And everyone was so lovely and I absolutely loved this!

Teru is a good friend, both in this fic and the show.

Poor awkward, PTSD suffering Mob. But what a good chapter. I wanted to say "sweet," but that doesn't seem like the right word.

Poor Mob. :'( And poor Ritsu, aware something is hurting his brother, but unable to figure out what it is.

Soooooo good thank you

Omg angst I love

Aw

Awww yeees

Loving it

This is cute and sweet and sad, thank you for it.

｡･ﾟ･(ﾉД)･ﾟ･｡ bweeeeeehh!
PS: all intelligent comments have left me.

How DARE you play with my feelings like this! Just when I thought the last chapter was fantastic, you blew me away once again with this chapter. It's SO good and I can't wait to see what you have in store for this! Kind of a short review, but it's DEFINITELY one of the better ones and I hope that you update soon!

I started reading this in ao3, because the mp100 fandom is moving very slowly here.
But I like ffnet's format better, after all. And imagine my delight finding this piece posted here.
I love your work, you take your time developing it's story. Sure, some people will find this slow. But the way you keep the length of each chapter and the way you end it each time just right, this is going to be a pleasure to read.
I look forward to your next update.

Thankyou for this story! I am so glad to see someone working through the concequences of that whole arc, I was a little upset when it all seemed forgotten in the manga :(
This is also just so well written and generally enjoyable, I hope you can contribute more wonderful works to this fandom :) xxx

I really like how slow you are going, outlining Mob's emotions and all. It's also nice to see an interpretation of how the events of the story actually have a lasting impact on the characters. I'm excited to see more. Keep up the good work. :D -faves-