...THIS!

Mah heart, mah soul! so Wholesome( ωωω )

Please Continue it's very good!

I liked the premise of the story when I read the summary but it’s still off-putting and a bit tacky how much of a social pariah Madoka is. It’s one thing to be bullied at school and I think that’s enough to drive the point you’re trying to make home- but to have almost EVERYBODY absolutely despise her is a bit of an overkill.
Also Saitama comes off as OOC.

Hahahahahaha Genos shipping the two is hilarious

Okay, I'm liking things so far but for the narration, is it Madoka doing it from a third-person point of view or is it an omniscient narrator? I want to know because the reliability of a narrator is important. I just don't see Saitama thinking that popular highschool girls are nothing more than second-rate human beings. I would understand if it were Madoka's thoughts though.

I think this explanation was better off as a footnote than a chapter.

The story is pretty good. there's only one thing that I can critique and that is the use of the word "I mean". The story is written in third person point of view, that word is first person. it doesn't go well with the rest of the structure and it distracts the reader.

otherwise, great story. very entertaining.

Bullies. Never met any, just met rough friends of mine who give too strong of a slap on the back. If I did, me and my boys would have probably got into a fist fight. Well still have a ways of school to go, and hope I don't encounter any. Cause I snap easily...

nah, it's still weird.

Yo you gotta continue this ’s really great to read

i get bullied in my first year of middle school and after i give them some lesson how bullied is wrong they stopped bullyng again and i almost forget one of them changed school
same as my first year highschool i get bullied and i give them some lesson and they stopping bullied me but changing target

whatever place you in bullyng is always come to different from the rest of peer
bullyng is idiot but the one who get bullied and never stood up is more idiot

This is a nice story, reminds me of a slice-of-life style anime which is an interesting contrast to the style of the original material. Keep it up!

I am shipping it so hard! She deserves to be happy!

Gosh cant believe everyone gets so upset cus shes 16 or whatevs. I get that in real life its usually messed up but its a fanfic where both parties have true love it can be a fun good romance fic. Keep up the good work i always love reading good cute fluff :)