this story has me hooked and I would love to see more. keep up the good work.

Sorry for the late review I lost my bookmarks!
I need more of this and more Leah femslash.

I love your story! 3 Please keep writing, do not leave me in doubt :'(

hi, great start! such a big pack but I like it!

I have to say, I'm madly in love with your story! You're obviously really talented, and I am so so impatient to read the next chapter! You also help me through my insomnia, so thank you, I love the way you wright, and I love your Leah! And Nubia! And it's so good of you to try putting homosexuality in a story like yours, well done! I stop sending you flowers now sorry, goodnight from France!

It wont happen but im actually hoping Leah will succeed.

oooooou

Just go do what you like writer. You are doing great. It is an interesting take on Leah's thinking and circumstance. And while this is femslash, it is not all about femslash and just Leah. You put other people's bits on it as well. Whether they became main or support, that is good. It diversifies your story. Kudos!

Interesting choice for power for Nubia as the vampires are vulnerable to fire if I recall correctly. :)

nice update

Never understood why Leah believes a bunch of misogynistic old men and teen about her being a genetic dead end. That's a lil too much self loathing that everyone loves to write.

Leah never had time to process what she wants...Jake is only alpha because his daddy is chief not because he's stronger. Leah and Seth have stronger bloodlines than anyone else, I hate how everyone makes such a big deal about that and ignores the most important part.

And one other thing, if the wolves never get old if they keep changing why do the imprints continue to age, that never made sense. SM is a teen writer but she keeps leaving holes in the story big enough for those giant wolves to run through.

Also why is everyone behaving like Leah can't kill a vampire alone? None of them can...in canon until the Cullens showed them how, none of them including Jake had fought one on one.

More Leah less canon loathing, please, lol.

I came for the Leah story...not interested in anyone else at all.

great story! i can't wait to read more! i didn't find the chapter boring at all, and i'm also eagerly anticipating an interaction between nubia and leah :)

Update! This is a different storyI love it!

Tell the pack to kiss your ass Leah.