That was amazing and cute! and so fitting for both characters. Vegeta is a genius in his own right. He's a very intelligent Saiyan. Having Vegeta help his wife because he loves her and hates to see her stressing out melt my heart. You've nailed his character, making him loving but not overly so. Fantastic work.

Cuuuute! This so gave me the giggles )

Oh I really loved this! It's been ages since I've read a DBZ or DBGT fanfic, and this one was perfect. I love your portrayal of all the characters, but especially Vegeta, who often becomes too OOC for tastes in most stories. You kept him just as he is and I looooooove it!

This was just completely perfect and both of them were fully in character. And I keep imagining Vegeta sitting at a desk and writing, and rolling his eyes at all the mistakes; it just totally cracks me up.

This was a very fun short to read.

I kept thinking back to that book Bulma wrote her notes on for the time machine in DB Super and how even she didn’t understand it. It was probably just the science going over her head, but I found the thought that she couldn’t read her now stuff rather comical.

I really think Bulma’s personality shown through in this piece, you could feel her spunk and sense of self importance. And, Vegeta being anal retentive about grammar feel in character to me.

Sadly this piece was a little too relatable for me, I’m pretty dyslexia and my teacher though that instead of learning things like a noun is a person, place, or thing or where to put a comma they had me just read books, which seriously did not help. When I got my copy of ‘The Bedford Handbook’ in college it was like the fucking holy grail to me (by then the damage was already done tho).
Thanks for the read
b-chan

very funny cute and in character. i think having vegeta as an editor does work for his character since as a prince and intergalactic planetary officer[?] words and diction are important in getting other to do what they want. Also, as an editor he would have the control/last say over something which is his character. great job. awesome story :D

I like the idea of Vegeta thinking "Mission Accomplished, I'm still kind of a bad guy." XD

Haha! As a professional editor I found this one shot very funny. I too have the headcanon that Vegeta is meticulous about many things - including grammar - where Bulma is famously messy.

I really love the plot of this ficlet. Super cute. Well done on the prose too!

That's brilliant and hilarious. I love it.

I liked this story.

Totally unexpected and very funny! And, of course, nicely written. :)
Congratulations and thank you for sharing your plot-bunny!