Reviews for Third and Sixteenth
JBMarchhare chapter 7 . 2/3
Loved it! Could really relate with all the characters, especially loved the characters Milt and De'jores. Excellent job at showing the readers and not simply telling me what is happening; could really feel the emotions at times.
costley51 chapter 7 . 5/5/2018
That's it! There's no more? I mean it's been really good, and I want to see where it goes from here.
costley51 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
I love that you wrote this. I appreciate the mixture of feelings the characters are dealing with.
Jenng612 chapter 7 . 10/10/2017
I love this story. I wish there was more of it.
by7the7sea chapter 2 . 12/27/2016
Thought about this story on my way to work this morning and had to read it again. It starts slow. Well, slow for me because it took me awhile to get to know the new characters, but it's not a problem in the later chapters. Can't wait to read the rest of this story.

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Guest chapter 7 . 12/7/2016
Oooh, this is beautiful. So sad, and so good. Nicely done.
Beth Nottingham chapter 7 . 12/9/2016
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't be over! This fic was so freakin' beautiful-omg! PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S A SEQUEL! You can't end it THERE! (Cries hysterically) Seriously, withdrawals!
by7the7sea chapter 7 . 12/7/2016
Awww. That was a nice ending to the story.

Where did Bucky go? Will there be a sequel to this story? One where he goes back to that diner? Or is he not welcome there anymore?

Also, where's Steve?

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by7the7sea chapter 6 . 12/7/2016
Oh my, that hug he gave D'joris and the "thank you for being my friend" made me cry ... at work.

Still curious about what exactly happened after Siberia and where Steve is.

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by7the7sea chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
Okay, so this story is set after Siberia. That explains the arm. So, where is Steve?

Interesting that Pepper went to Vision and that Vision had already looked up everything about Bucky.

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by7the7sea chapter 1 . 12/7/2016
Interesting set up here, but why does Bucky have a cheap metal and plastic hand?

Other than that, I'm intrigued.

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Kay Linne chapter 7 . 12/7/2016
So this just made my day! Sweet and sharp, I loved your diner characters, the chance they took on helping, and the results of said help. (The real world needs more of this...) Nice weaving of the Marvel characters into the narrative, I adore Clint and his family, and Laura's counting of words spoken was just the best! Soda Jerk! Does anyone even remember them anymore?! Well done. Didn't even miss Steve... :) And not even sad over the last line, the grin on my face is too wide!
scottiedog chapter 7 . 12/5/2016
Loved this story! Exciting as well as insightful with Bucky. Good Job! :)
Whitelion69 chapter 7 . 12/5/2016
This was a very good story.
karina001 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Fin? End?! Ah,,, would begging weasel just a little more out of you? Okay, so a lot more would make a body happy but... fin? Really? Lovely to see Bucky with the Barton kids... and I loved that word count in the beginning. Oooh, maybe end of part 1? You leave me begging for more, so kudos to you for a job well done.
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