Am I the only one how sees that this Chapter makes no sense
Perci" We have a map and Lord Elrond can read it "
And you can too 1017 year old Idiot. You didn't get the Gift for all languages for nothing !

I take it that they don’t know she’s a demigoddess do they?

I'll be honest, it's quite rare for the weirdo to get a moment of cockiness and smugness, so I preferred the movie scene in which Radagast gets to say his "I'd like to see them try" line as opposed to Perci saying it.

aww this is really cute!

Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

I really liked your book. It made me smile. Thank You!

You really are a great writer. You have changed my mind about fanfiction.

Legolas all the way!

I really like this chapter. I really want Perci to fall in love with Legolas!

Just so you know, when listing the names of the animals at the end of the chapter, you have 2 pegasi named Copper

Nice story

T.R.R. Tolkien?
I thought his first name began with a J...

I love Perci and Elrond. Elrond is so sweet.

I like Persephone. Thorin's condition was unfair. That if any drawf died, he would kill her. It's going to be all out battle, how can he value the life of his dwarfs this much over hers?

This is great! I can tell you were young writing here, but the grammar is great, the storyline is imaginative, and the detail is impressive. It's also a fun read!