I really enjoyed these. I think you did a good job of writing Seto and making him less over-the-top that he was in canon. I always enjoy seeing other peoples’ versions of Kisara, since she is pretty much an OC and your version complemented Seto well. :)

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I seriously love this chapter so much. I read it twice today already.

lovely, intriguing, and enjoyable 3

Amazing!

Oh. Can't wait. ;)

hey! thanks for updating so fast:)
ive enjoyed the fact that kisaras past is explored, i like it how in your story shes her own person, has her own struggles and isnt only there to support seto. a chapter dealing with kaiba meeting kisaras parents would be very nice!
and the idea of setos mother being a nurse is very cool too! it fits my idea of how she was pretty well.
hmmmm i find your point about prideshipping pretty valid. i guess i saw kaiba only as a tragic and lonely character and missed the disturbed teenager part. interesting. i have to think about it:)

I HATE MYSELF AND MY LIFE SUDDENLY. I really like how sweet this fanfic is so far and feel like my own fanfic is crap in comparison. That's because it's so good!

Okay, first things first: you already messed up on the color of Kisara's hair. xD You said blonde when it's white. Also, OH MY GOD. Your Seto drinks straigh vblack coffee, like mine!
Okay, I'm sold. Favoriting and following, now! :D

hey! as usual, ive enjoyed the new chapter very much. to be honest i dont really get prideshipping, ive always thougt that kaiba and atem were kind of frenemies and respecting each other in their own way, ive never interpreted their "relationship" as based on any sort of sexual feelings. but to be frank ive never read the manga and watched the anime as 12 years old and since then sticked with fanfiction, so maybe i was too young to get it or any sort of hints at sexual attraction between the two of them.
my interpretation of the relationship between atem and kaiba is, that atem respected kaiba as rival and human being and saw him as sort of a friend or ally. kaiba on his side respected atem and sure saw the similarities in their characters that normally would allow them to form a friendship, but was too cynical and afraid after all what happened to him to let anyone beside mokuba close. and there was of course the issue of what gozaboro taught kaiba about loosing, and since atem was the one to defeat kaiba over and over again he couldnt bring himself to see atem as more than a person who made him question himself and his ways every time he lost. so i totally support the idea of kaiba having really strong and extreme feelings for atem, even close to obsession, but none of them in the sexual/romantic sort of way.

Ch 3 - so cute! They would definitely do stuff like that for the children. Also, your Seto is so on point.

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I love all these extras! This one was really cute

Ch 2 - I love Mokuba in this! Laughed out loud when he tried to make Seto admit to liking Kisara

hey there, a very nice chapter again! looking forward to more from you:)