Ooh! Very spooky! Thank you for sharing!

That was a nice Halloween story with some Danny whump for added pleasure. It was good that Steve felt the presence and saw the woman, too. Moves it from a crazy Danny story to a true haunted house story. After the woman trouble Danny has had over the years, it was nice to see a woman help him, even if it was a ghost.

Quite spooky. I enjoyed seeing what Danny saw & experienced. Waving good bye at the end was the best.

Love this spooky little story, well done.

I love these eerie, supernatural stories! This just sent chills through me, especially when Danny started seizing.

Loved it! Spooky with Danny whump to boot... Great Halloween present. Thanks!

Nice, spooky Halloween story. Will there be a part 2? Hope so!

Amazingly written story

Nicely done. Not your usual style, but really good. Maybe you should try another one of these before Halloween? I also hope that we get Halloween stories in the pet verse and dragon verse. Can't wait for your next story.

Good job. Glad Steve didn't think Danny was crazy. That he too felt a presence.

This is a very good one-shot.