Reviews for A Cyan Yokai Tale
FanficBomber35 chapter 10 . 9/19
I love this story so far! Great work! I like this!
Switch 4 Life chapter 15 . 4/29/2019
Will other Yokai like Komasan and Noway evolve?
DragonBladeB5 chapter 15 . 4/10/2019
How's it hanging, Ben and Draggie? DragonBladeB5 in the house!

Firstly, Ben, you must feel excited graduating next month!

And second, after graduating, I have a fanfic request, please?

Yo-kai watch/Pokemon crossover fanfic

Also, "fixing Yu-gi-oh Arc-V", what does that mean, anyway?
muk854 chapter 15 . 4/1/2019
Yet another amazing chapter, glad to see Nate and Katie made up. Oh and yes! Shadow Venoct is here, yes! Cannot wait to see more of him.

Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Melody Bloom chapter 15 . 3/30/2019
Sick references! XD It sure is a shame the Shadowside anime ended the other day.. And is being replaced "Yo-Kai Watch!" And Keita/Nate is back in it...
At least the Shadowside's final arc was amazing as all heck.. Bad part is no subs for it XD

I really enjoyed your chapter! I hope you enjoyed writing it!
Guest chapter 13 . 12/19/2018
why not bring Hailey and usapyon into the the story. I'm dying to see Ben's reaction to the otaku...i mean detective
NodokaLover chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
Can ya please do one about Foiletta and Slush, and Komasan giving access to Komane. When Whisper and Jibanyan merge, they become Buchinyan.
DragonbladeB5 chapter 14 . 10/8/2018
How's it hanging, Ben and Draggie? DragonbladeB5 in the house!

Firstly, Unpleasant is a bug, the pattern on his robe resembles a mosquito, his mustache resembles a bug's mandibles and mosquitoes fly and flying is associated with wind, which is Unpleasant's attribute. Also Gin hinted "buzz off, bug!", in this chapter. Meaning Unpleasant is in fact, a mosquito!

And second, I hope you guys update sooner.
muk854 chapter 14 . 9/8/2018
Oh boy, things are getting hectic. Not only are Kin and Gin back, but now Unpleasant is giving the executives more power, they are not going to be easy.

But at least now Nate has put aside any problems he had with the Yo-Kai thanks to Ben. But, and I don't mean the be against Ben, the Yo-Kai have made Nate's life a mess since he got the watch. Just saying, a lot of times something bad happens to Nate, a Yo-Kai is involved. I can understand why Nate would be mad at them, just look at my story, An Entranced Tale, to get a better picture of what I mean.

Anyways, it's good to see another chapter of this story and I look forward to more of it.
Geuast chapter 14 . 9/7/2018
Have you trired watch shadow side? It's dubbed some where
Yo-Kai watch fan chapter 12 . 6/19/2018
It’s been a while since the last chapter. I’m so glad that the next chapter is out. I’m glad we finally got to see moximous N and K interact with there grand children and I love how you showed of Unkeens strength. I’ve lived this fanfic for a long time and I can’t wait to see what happens next
DragonbladeB5 chapter 13 . 5/28/2018
Hey, Ben & Draggie ! DragonbladeB5 in the house!

A reminder regarding my review about Leapire.

Firstly, in my Leapire review, when I mentioned he makes whoever he possesses literally jumpy, I never meant like they were standing on a jack in a box. What I meant was he makes whoever he possesses bounce like bunny rabbits, meaning they're bouncing with both legs straight. And second, the transylvanian accent, this is a jiangnshi (a chinese vampire), not the type of vampire in europe. He would've used a normal voice. Also, he often prefers speaking chinese. And third, Leapire is a classic yo-kai. And knowing Whisper, he would've been fanboying out by then. I also forgot some things about Leapire's powers, abilities and personality. Whenever he bites someone's neck and drinks their blood, then they're for at least a moment, rendered unconscious. And his personality, Leapire is also shy around women & girls he feels affectionate towards. And although, he often feels nervous women & girls he feels affectionate towards, He can sometimes also be romantic towards them. Can you guys rewrite this chapter, please?

By the way, Ben. In my next review, since school's out, I have questions I need you and Draggie to answer for me, please. I also have questions for Nate, Katie, Whisper, Jibanyan and the others.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/21/2018
hey in case if your going to use soultimate in the story i decided to write them down just in case so i hope you can update soon
Ms. Fortune soultimate: draining slash- uses her sword whip to slash her enemies with brute force multiple times while it drains their hp and uses to heal her teammates
unmemorable soultimate: colorful rain- uses her umbrella to summon a paint cloud that spews paint drops which heals allies and boost all good stats
caballino soultimate: scheming blade-uses his knife to slash the opponent while spreading bad stats to the enemy(attack/defense will be lowered)
Guest chapter 13 . 5/18/2018
hey this story is good keep it up also i hope my legendary fusion is acceptable
Name: unmemorable
Tribe: wicked
Rank: A
Attribute: healer
Personality: cautious/ intelligent /honest /bold /has a passion with art /quiet /adventurous /tends to procrastinate/ not interested in other people/yokai problems
Appearance: pasty skin fuchsia eyes round ears looks like 19 short white fluffy pixie hair has a tattoo of an axolotl on her stomach
Clothes: black tube top light purple crop top hoodie black leggings white shorts red sash wrap around her waist pink high-top shoes silver chain belt pink/purple headphones carries a bag of art supplies and sketch books to draw and an umbrella
Powers: makes people /yokai be a passionate artist
Background: doesn't remember anything from her past other than having half of a yokai watch model U (which is broken), since she can’t remember anything she follows where their places for making art may have a connection with the broken watch
is currently looking for a place to draw and paint (not related to dame detime and the wicked executive)

Name: caballino ( ca-ba-li-no; the first l is silent)
Tribe: charming
Rank: A
Attribute: drain
Personality: charming /deceitful /bold /reckless/ trickster /a bit of a pimp (he tries to "charm" the women by pampering them with gifts and stuff like the ideal boyfriend) /is viscous and cruel to enemies (hell even try kidnapping)/is a coward when things don’t go his way
Appearance: maroon medium long messy hair (prefers to keep it on a ponytail) hazel eyes pointy ears dark tan skin height is 5'10 has a heavy Spanish accent when talking looks like an old college student in the 20’s monarch butterfly wings
Clothes: a black zoot suit with a black fedora carries a knife
Powers: makes people/yokai act like a con artist
Background: doesn't remember anything from his past other having half of a yokai watch model U (which is broken), since he can’t remember anything he follows where there's lots of tourist. may have a connection with the broken watch
is currently scamming yokai/people
the only way to fuse is to convince caballino and unmemorable to work together in return for items(i.e crayons,money)

Name: Ms. Fortune (American legendary)
Tribe: shady
Rank: SS
Attribute: drain
Appearance: red eyes brownish reddish long wavy hair that somehow resembles a chameleon’s tail (prefers in a pony tail) round ears tan skin brown eyes height is 5'0 has a bilingual accent(english/spanish) when talking looks like she's in her 20's is able to changes its skin color to match its surroundings so that it cannot be seen (like an actual chameleon)
clothing: wears a white long sleeve shirt with a dark green vest khaki pants black boots and a long coat (it supposed to look like one of those private detective stuff) she carries a sword whip around, a yokai watch model u (no longer functional), and an ID badge
Personality: mature but retains some childish nature in her /tends to be a loner though she doesn’t show it to anyone /tends to procrastinate a bit/ is a hard worker /doesn't like big crowds/ is a gamer and otaku fan (has no favorite)
inspirit: it cancels yokais/humans skills resulting it useless
Background: she's a spy working for the yokai equivalent of the FBI trying to find and capture powerful yocriminals that might threaten the human world with her eight comrades. She ended up as a fusion after an experimental accident involving the essence of evil(its an item after defeating the wicked executive in yokai watch 2)
Golden Zero16 chapter 7 . 5/19/2018
Ben assumes quite a lot
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