Loved the interaction between Sherlock and Mycroft, and Mary's part in the affair. Great writing, as always!

Great story. I rarely get to enjoy one where Mycroft cannot solve the problem but is the cause of it as well. This was well done.

Another fantastic story from you. Loved the subtle threat at the beginning that had me hooked from the first line onwards, and the action, and the lovely H/C, and especially Sherlock (and Mary!) putting Mycroft in his place. Cleverly plotted, too. Sherlolly at its best!

A spectacular story like this deserves reviews on every chapter. I loved the story-line and the way Sherlock panicked after knowing about Molly's situation. Molly's sweet and I admire her for who she is. Please write more. You are awesome!

What a beautiful tale! Love it! Thank you so much for writing this. I loved the way you portrayed Sherlolly. It seemed realistic and natural. I loved the way you penned down every character. The plot was brilliantly narrated, bravo! Please write more.

Wow - just gorgeous. My favorite line was when you described Molly resting her forehead between Sherlock's shoulder blades. That image was really powerful. Thanks for this flawless two part!

I loved this. Absolutely stunning. Sherlock and Molly are so in character, and you write intensity really well. Thanks for this gem!

Brilliant! And I really like how much in character Sherlock is at the beginning of this chapter - he is always so snappish with people when someone he cares about is in danger - and his snide remarks to Mycroft are just icing on the cake. And I love how level headed Molly is, she truly is an amazing character. Well done!

I love your Sherlock and I love your Molly. I love how you're able to covey such depth of emotion through just a few words and actions. I love how real and tangible this story feels, believable to its core. Thank you for writing for this ship.

Lovely little story, just the right amount of affection without being overly mushy, and a nice pace to the action. I liked how you used Mary too, a lot of people leave her out, but she is a magnificent character.

An absolutely perfect end cap to the first chapter. You captured Mycroft and Sherlock's interactions perfectly, as you always do. Mary was equally delightful, and the end scene between Sherlock and Molly was just lovely. Thank you so much for sharing!

This is a wonderful chapter. I love the set up, that there is absolutely nothing that she can pin point, and how he knows that means it's a professional, not just her imagination. This whole chapter kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you so much for sharing!

So much love for this!

This. Perfect illustration of declaration of love through action and not words. How subtle, but delivers the message clearly anyway. Lovely!

Glorious, glorious setup.