I really hope there's a sequel like shows what happen to ren or the fate of cinder like an ending similar to fnaf 3 where the purple guy or in this case cinder hides in something thinking there safe but then brutally dieing but somehow coming back for vengeance till the souls are free

So will there be a continuation of this story? If not then I must say that I am a little disappointed with the ending.

I’m guessing that ‘toothpick’ isn’t really a toothpick.

Thought this was an AU instead of a sequel.

Directed by M. Night Shyamalan

Nice job

HOLY SHIT! IT SAID HELP ME FROM SUFFERING!

hmm. the mad squiggles turned upsidedown, and read through a code almost read HiEDEMFRMESALLIM which almost sounds like: Hide Me/Them From Salem

Curious.

A very good story that I enjoyed reading.

However it just feels incomplete to me: Ren having own mission to save everyone, the war between Ozpin and Salem is still going on which will undoubtedly effect Jaune and company, and Summer Rose is apparently doing something that Ozpin and Salem are unaware of. Also I would have thought that there would have been a far more emotional reunion between Jaune and Pyrrha.

Personally I think that there should be a sequel or at the very least an epilogue.

Keep up the good work.

this story is AMAZING! Keep it up;

You captured the FNAF viewpoint perfectly: moving the plot forward while STILL HAVING NO IDEA WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING!

This was a nice twist. I like the idea here of Jaune being tasked with saving his friends, but not remembering the past initially.

You did a great job with the suspense and horror here. You kept me on the edge and I was really afraid Jaune was going to buy it several times here. Your descriptions of the girls while they were under programming was unsettling. Dropping the romance angle was probably a smart choice here given the short number of chapters you would have, developing a good romance while juggling the other aspects of the story might've detracted from it. Plus the best way to have made it work would be to have Jaune vaguely recalling a relationship with one of them in bits and pieces while the girl couldn't tell him anything despite possibly remembering it herself. If anything, a romance would be more appropriate in a followup story.

I like the end scene with Ozpin and Salem. I find it interesting that we didn't see a piece representing Neo, but then again this seems to have been a game geared at taking Ozpin's supporters away, though I think it's safe to say Neo is on Jaune's side at this point.

Ren sounds like he's getting setup to do his own version of this story. That means there are probably still some people who have been caught and need to be saved in a similar manner, but Ren still has all his memories and knowledge to work with.

This was really entertaining and fun to guess who was active and who was doing what. Great job.

I had Jun just figuring out your little word play, reminded me of that one Nicolas cage movie... the one with mt Rushmore

Nicely done indeed my friend.

Ok so the notes aren't yang I don't think...hmmm

Nice!