| Reviews for Vivid |
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  Guest chapter 17 . 7/4/2019 You should do a BDSM chapter. Just a suggestion. |
 Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 17 . 4/1/2019 Liam O’Brien would be an awesome voice actor for the next god of war game! |
| Random-Gaurdian chapter 15 . 3/3/2019 That was amazing! Well done ;) |
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/19/2019 hi but will you update? |
| jelsalove chapter 16 . 1/14/2019 DO A BDSM ONE! Have naked Elsa giving her master Jack a blowjob, while her hands are tied behind her back! |
| Jelsafan chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 You should really do a hardcore BDSM chapter! Were Jack is in charge and Elsa is the roleplaying slave! Bondage, whips, gagged and everything! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/2/2018 You should make a Jelsa bdsm chapter Just a suggestion |
| pancakesonragegmail.com chapter 16 . 9/11/2018 "Rag-dolled like a dead GTA character" Fucking lol. Im just imagining some kind of Skyrim guard just falling on the floor |
| Furiyan chapter 16 . 9/11/2018 Huh. It's a step away from your usual fare. Interesting read, though - lucky for me that my anti-Helsa-ness has somewhat mellowed. I still despise the ship, but I don't feel nauseous when reading it. So, it's good - not least for the death of Hans. Incidentally, I never quite finished Haywire. Kind of lost interest about a quarter through. |
| AlphaWolf97100 chapter 14 . 4/18/2018 Well let's see: Obligatory Fight reference? CHECK! Crazy description of sex? DOUBLE CHECK! And, no. No I'd say you've got waaaay crazier sh*t up your sleeve and I for one can't wait to see what you got. 10/10. As always, stay awesome. -AW97100 |
| Furiyan chapter 13 . 1/26/2018 Ooof. This is why I like Vivid; you're not afraid to tackle the hotter, kinkier, out-there stuff. Push the boat out. I liked it. Very hot, and the jealous, get-away-from-her-and-my-OTP kinda enhanced that rather than took away from it. Poor Jack, though - Elsa seemed to neglect him in favour of Hiccup. I'd wondered when you were going to do MMF DP. Had an idea myself, involving a scientific accident, two Jacks, and a suddenly horny Elsa. Pleased you did it first! |
| ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 13 . 1/25/2018 Eh, would have been interesting if there was some slash, but at least you made some Elsa x Hiccup to make up for that Jack x Astrid chapter a while back. |
| MCRightwing chapter 12 . 12/4/2017 Glad to see you're back. I think you've redeemed yourself for that last chapter. Can you do one with Jack and Elsa in the shower? Or maybe even a bath? |
| MC Rightwing chapter 11 . 8/12/2017 Since you're willing to both take requests and do creative things with the characters, can you do a chapter where Jack is the king of Sparta and Elsa is his queen? Kinda like in 300. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/11/2017 Wow. I was thinking...maybe it was Pitch :/ vhf no. i don't want that |
