I don't like it how they only blame Dean for Sam's kidnapping. But actually everyone had part of the fault. When Dean asked John about the children's dissappearances, John didn't elaborate when he said not to look for them, which of course made Dean more curious and obsessed with the case. I mean you can't just tell a TEENAGER not to do something they've kind of become obsessed in doing, and give them no explanation and then expect them to follow the instructions everytime! So that's why it was partly John's fault. And also, Sam willingly accepted to help Dean with the case. And lastly we know Dean's part of the fault. So why are they just blaming it on Dean? It's so unfair! And John just made it worse for him!

I really like how well done this story is, even though Sam is the victim he's not taking everything lying down, he's still fighting in his own way. Which is not the case in some stories. The family bond was well portrayed as well.

My only issue would be that there was a lack of demon interference (at least in my opinion). The human trafficking ring seems that it would be something that would attract demons, and (I think) Azazel wouldn't want one of his precious pawns demoralized by the capture, he'd want them to be strong, so he would have interfered (at least in my opinion, especially since Sam was his favorite).

Will do.
I have to get going for now, but don't be surprised to find me reading the sequel by tomorrow.
As for what I thought of this story.
I think Sam thinks he still has the collar on.
I don't think it's just psychological, although that would linger.
And I'm certain he hasn't seen himself in a mirror yet.
Sometimes, we all need that to "get back to reality"

This was a good story, and I look forward to "Becoming Human."

Thanks.

Argh!

Why you cliffhanging little B-ch, lol

Thanks

I'm glad 14710 is getting back to The States.
He deserves it!
Weird about Sam, though!

Oh no!
Too soon, isn't it?

Liu saved him, and wants him healthy. We ought to give him some credit.
At least until John gets there, hee, hee, hee.
Believe me, whatever they do to him, won't be as bad as organ harvesting, and I think Sam has a rare blood-type, that Davies could have made a fortune off of.
Good thing he didn't know it..

Lucky fire, I hope!

The plot thickens . . .

What a way to fly.

Well...that's a new one on me.
But they should have taken Dean for that too!
He's also a real looker.
Sam, a # now.
Reminds me of an old show called Secret Agent Man:
"They've giving you a number, and taken away your name".
Although he became a spy.
But still, a haunting thought.
Thanks.

Well, that was nearly heart wrenching.
I fear Sam is starting to lose it.

Awww, poor Sammy.
He did fairly well.
His mistake was stopping to use the phone instead of finding a place to hide.
Although, they could have decided to use the collar long enough to kill him, if they knew they couldn't find him.
But I would have taken that risk.

Oh, I think Sam has much more fight in him yet.
So long as he is healthy enough to do so; those head blows aren't helping any, is for sure.
Thanks.

Holy cow, I guessed right?
Do you know what that even means?
I watch too many cop shows!
Hahahahahahahahaha.

I don't blame John for being upset, but he seems confident that he will find/save Sam, and maybe a couple of other kids in the process.
I think that's the only reason he hasn't beaten the tar out of Dean.
Obviously, Dean feels his own pain and blame.

Thanks.
I think I shall stay up all night reading the rest of this story.