| Reviews for NaLu Lovefest 2016 Plus |
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TheJSmooth chapter 4 . 3/29/2018 These two can't keep their hands to themselves lol |
TheJSmooth chapter 1 . 3/29/2018 Oh wow Lucy is a mess when she is drunk lol as usual |
Shell1331 chapter 8 . 11/17/2017 Great ending to this! Liked seeing Natsu struggle with the rules of the "game" but it was also really sweet that he conceded...to a point ;-) And that ending with Virgo and Loke totally cracked me up - I'm not at all surprised Virgo was behind the chain! Hopefully she does tell Lucy LOL |
DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 8 . 11/17/2017 Thank you, thank you, thank you! Fabulous continuation! I loved their adherence to their roles - Maid Lucy is just as dedicated as Virgo, and Master Natsu is one lucky so-and-so! Well written, hot (And hawt) and delivers the feel a as well as the smut. How did I get so lucky to fall in with you and your crowd? Such a hilarious end as well - Virgo goes hard core with the punishment theme - and Loke's admonishment over the dangers was fitting. I loved every part of this - your entire lovefest series - all your writing. Fantastic! |
Shell1331 chapter 7 . 10/22/2017 Lucy is wise to trust Levy to have discretion more than anyone else in the guild LOL and Levy role-playing as a Gajeel groupie is too funny. I can see him being on board with that though. Nice job here with Lucy's role - like I said on Tumblr, I can tell she took some inspiration from Virgo...I don't know whether to feel sorry for Natsu or not (I don't...). I am a tad curious about what Natsu purchased from said "adult" store LOL Well done as always! |
Dewa1990 chapter 7 . 10/22/2017 Please write a part 2 for this |
DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 7 . 10/22/2017 Bless you for this amazing continuation. This is wonderfully written, engaging and blazing HOT! Wow ~ just...wow. |
Shell1331 chapter 6 . 10/14/2017 Nicely done! Plenty naughty, a good use of both prompts, and I loved their little banter at the end (somehow I don't imagine Natsu is EVER good at quiet meditation, but especially not given these circumstances!) |
Sayaka Chan 94 chapter 6 . 10/14/2017 I am so happy I could discover your oneshots and I love it your sexy fluffy and passionate nalu and I love your main plot can't wait th read the other prompts 3 Keep doing the amazing work ! Sayaka |
SazHearT chapter 2 . 9/21/2017 This was so sweet.. |
jamim22 chapter 5 . 2/12/2017 Read straight through, really good! |
DancesWithSeatbelts chapter 5 . 2/9/2017 Very hot ~ Natsu sure is lucky! A great description of Lucy's outfit and a sex game that is unique. |
Npcmarina chapter 5 . 2/8/2017 A little heat with humor. I love it when authors do that it makes the characters seem less out of character and more like there normal awkward being. I loved it don't stop writing, it is very easy to read what you write I love it ️ |
xSteleAliniax chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 Steamy, steamy, steamy! Very well-written. You are truly impressive. I look forward to reading more of your work. Loved this first scene! Stele |
Jcat007 chapter 4 . 1/16/2017 This is a great read! I love the details and the fact that they are not sappy or continually taking about being mates. Well done! I can totally ser them being like this in the anime/manga. |