Hey,
This story is pretty cool!
I love it, but i dont really like the way where you add people who isnt in the anime..

just this little sentence which means everything : WAIT WHAATTT XXDDD

Please, can you kill yourself

Trash ! Why because of Mark and his Bastards who has no right to live, dont care about their Background they are Trash and should die like the Scum they are.

...and here I thought Ace was the responsible one -_- (aside from Sabo)
The next thing you know his narcolepsy kicks in full gear... (Ace is supposed to live! LIVE!)
Please update your stories soon -3-

Over all not a bad story and I like the idea of the linked DFs however the whole concept of White coats and their seemingly amazing power that has so many people living in terror is just too much.

...Ace got his brain damaged by Garp lol.
Ace is ace, ya can't change that! But seriously, how could anyone forget something so important that quickly?
(They should put meat on the ground as trails lol. Hoping luffy doesnt eat em hahaha!)

heyy buddy u havent updated in a while u good
i really like this story and cant wait till next chapter

ello i havent reviwed this for a couple of chapters now.
so i just want tto stick my encouragements in.
your story is really funny and creative im really enjoying it
ive reread it a couple of times already and i hop you update soon

Why only saboxmarco's relationship is in danger? I feel this is unfair. I mean the mark man is only interested in sabo right?

Looks good so far!
And really nice development there - Shanks knowing Ms. Portgas? Awesome!
I'll return soon. Keep on the writes. :)

AH It's been a while since I've been back to the world of fanfiction, and it's great that one of your stories welcomed me back.
Good start!

...Ace is in big trouble. How he lived to see the day...
Grrat story though!
The characters are sorta ooc but its a great story nonetheless!

Wow those were some quick updates lol. 2 thumbs up for kerennie! xD gets won over by luffy's puppy dog eyes XD
Holy smoke HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Ace u r choosing such worse times to get short term memory loss seriously. And he's supposed to be the 2nd responsible older brother lol.
Forgetting a plan isnt the best idea lol. (But im laughing so hard so who cares lol)
;D update again soon! On all ur stories! I like the new one u posted for a request XD its really cute lol. And best of all its a sabo x oc fanfic lol. I was curious lol.
Good luck for ur readers will stick by ur side! XD

Ace...you seriously chose the worst times to get a memory loss. Lol XD Makes me wonder how Ace has survived for so long lol. Poor Sabo and Luffy. Lol. Luffy is so innocent lol. The others better not think of tainting an innocent Luffy, but then again can luffy even be tainted? Looking at the original storyline...nah.
Well that was a really interesting omake XD it was also a quicker update too:) please update again soon Kerennie! I look forward to all your stories!
(I love one piece so its really fortunate ur stories are about em. Especially since it includes ASL trio lol. Love ur stories a lot!)