Good OS

Are you going to continue this? It was sooo good. I watched the second movie for the hundreth time and I really wanted to read something like this. Good job.

Well, this didn't quite go how I was expecting.
I'd like another chapter purely for a Happy Ending, but I totally understand why you want to end it here. The Mindy-VS-The World thing you set up at the end is cool and all, but I feel like if she was really working with anyone she'd have /someone/ backing her up. At least one sniper if not a team of professionals.

I like your Mindy, she is really good, a lot more mature and smarter, but it's still the Mindy we all know.

Really good Fic, I really hope you write more KickAss, they have been really good. Have you thought about doing a longer story? Rather than just a one-shot, they are good, but this is a very interesting world you have created and I'd love to see more of it.

I love Mindy/Dave fanfics so much! and this was a really good one.
(While I was reading this, I had "for always" by Simon Steadman on repeat and I'm surprised that was the perfect song to read this story xD)

Make a story about stronger relationship between them.