it is indeed well made though you should add more complex words to describe how they feel and you should fix your grammar

I love it... Thank you, Cyber.

Not bad, I like the battle scared Jaune(if I can manage to sleep that is, I tried 3 times to get his name right). Went a tad fast but I like it brings it is a one shot. Good work!

Cinder's death was brutal, 10/10

good end
always nice ;_;