I love it when we can see the protective side of Keith!

Soooooooo good. Keith whump, love it. Poor keith

I love keith and lance in this story so much. I love the bonding you wrote and that's how the two partner are with each other.

I loved Keith and Lance in the story. It was so cute how protective they were of the little girl. I also enjoyed their valor, especially Keith's.

I can relate with Keith here, I always choose red, and I will fight anyone who tries to take it from me.

Crap. Keith has like NO self-preservation instincts. He really IS a red shirt. Wow. But because you aren't cruel, he won't actually die... I hope. Aurelis reads like I do. Oh my word. That is how I am with books. Haha

Uuuggghhhh I hate cliff hangers!
Well... time to read the next one and procrastinate on homework. :)

Oh crud . . . Why do you put them through so much? I mean it's good, really REALLY good : ) , but still poor paladins . . . I can't wait to read more : )

Beyris sort of reminds me of Numbuh 3 from the Kids Next Door. . . I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot : )

So amazing! I loved every word of it. The characterization, the plot, the action, it was all fantastic! You're very talented! :)

Bless Beyris' little heart! She's such a darling. :3

Pidge and I are exactly the same when it comes to mornings. -_-

*crying*
Beyris is so precious...Lance is so precious...Keith is so precious...so much feels right now...*cries*
Awesome job! :D :D I was on my toes the whole way through! Great suspension and I love Beyris so much. She is the most amazing child and I love her. I love how Keith and Lance tried to keep Beyris happy through it all with Lance's smooth comments and Keith leaving his soft jacket with her and now I'm crying again. :,D
And I really hope Keith is alright. D: I don't know how we can deal with two of our precious paladins in their reserved healing pods.

First off, I love this series, it's so good. I love the way you gave the lions personalities!
Thank you for saying it was Theseus not Perseus that slayed the Minotaur I wrote Perseus on a paper I recently wrote...

WHY DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS!? ALL THESE CLIFFY'S! UUGGHHH!