| Reviews for The First Warlock |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2019 sounds like cancer |
 Superman90 chapter 4 . 9/27/2019 hope you continue this:P |
| TechnoGalen chapter 2 . 10/14/2018 The grammar is absolutely atrocious and you need to make some serious corrections to this and probably the rest of your stories as well. You need a beta bad. |
| TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 You could've said brain dead and not retarded. |
| RikudoNaruto1 chapter 4 . 9/5/2018 looking forward to the next chapter :D |
| RikudoNaruto1 chapter 3 . 9/5/2018 great chapter :D |
| RikudoNaruto1 chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 Good stuff :D |
| Chaos Lion-Fox chapter 4 . 8/19/2018 what happened to snake of the underworld I can't find it |
| MythAnime chapter 4 . 8/19/2018 Stop with the crossovers medusa and chrona are kinky enough you dont need to get every vagina in fiction for one story The more characters you introduce the less screentime the main characters get |
| Eternity456 chapter 4 . 8/19/2018 Interesting chapter I am getting really pumped for the next chapter and wow naruto is powerful though that was kinda obvious. I wonder what death is going to think when he returns. Keep up the good work and I hope you update this soon |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 This is hot trash |
| LordofTerror chapter 4 . 8/19/2018 man I really wanted this story to be good and it just got worse farther on with the horrendous grammar and spelling and the little to know real plot development plus you kill your story with your long ass author notes which have nothing to do with your story. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/31/2017 harem story I don't know if this is oh well I'll find out |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/31/2017 make more please |
| Vigriff chapter 2 . 10/25/2017 You need to edit your chapters. |
