Please, for the love of Oum, proofread your chapter before working on the next one. There are some serious grammar mistakes that someone, who isn't taking an English class, can easily spot.

A nic fight seen this chapter

not bad. looking forward to 'giri giri chambara' at some point. no doubt ruby will go chibi mode again when seeing lazer's lv.3 weapons. until the next one, ja ne!

do more this good this be more story.

You really need a beta reader if you're gonna make more chapters for this story.

You even made a grammar mistake in the preview!

"Yang, you was too harsh for him."

It's supposed to be "were" instead of "was". -_-

Beta reader, get one !

I'm sorry to say this, I really do, but you seriously need a major overhaul on your grammar.

You need to think of a better plot, action scene, and dialogue with other characters. -_-

Two words: BETA READER

Keep up the good work

Whoa cool

Oh. My. God. Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere. (O_O) It's really a pity to see you man, I really wish I could become a beta-reader for you.