Reviews for Luck Takes Many Forms
a chapter 1 . 3/20/2019
"Plate Guardian" oh my god hahahahaha
Reality Dumper chapter 1 . 5/13/2017
Wat...that was really entertaining hahaha
ContemplativeCkik chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
As a connoisseur of both softball and gays, I must say: fookin niiiiice.
A Faggot chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
I don't know, the picture's angle makes it look like Umi has no pupils. I always see it as Umi trying to take Maki's soul instead of what it's supposed to be. "YOUR SOUL IS MINE!"

Clueless Maki is funniest Maki. "Why is the shortstop so tall? But everyone is a catcher!" Oh God I'm dying.

You seemed to type "apologize" instead of "apology" for Umi's apology.

Maki's embarrassment is hilarious. "I'm having a stroke. Nurse, you're going to have to put me down." My sides.
shero56 chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
came in immediately when I saw its Maki x Umi. I'm thinking that Umi did the two foul balls on purpose, either that or Maki is just plain unlucky (or lucky)
Hey chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Omg I found the "nurse put me down" too funny
NoGang123 chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Please do a maki X eli story!
JoaquinHawke chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Yes, I'm really, really, into RinMaki, i love that ship...
But, this was awesome, like, hell dude, i actually enjoyed this, good fucking work!
9/10