I miss this story...

This was a great chapter and overall it's a great story to behold. I honestly can't wait to see more of this...

I see a little too much LGBT representation here at this point in the story. Realistically, I think at least half of these people would be straight or gay and not non binary or trans, which is a lot less common.

This was great, some bumblebee moments as well as Blake's PoV with the group hug made this a sensational chapter at least for me. That last part made a lot of sense and l didnt think of how she didnt have her 'my' time before. Thanks for this lovely chapter and l will anticipate the next one no matter how long it will take (just take your time). This chapter was worth every wait

Normally, I'm not a fan of stories with nonbinary characters, because most of the time, the author can't seem to introduce such characters without making a huge deal of it, wasting paragraphs on how the character might LOOK like what people would consider of binary gender, but actually they're this or that or the other thing and you shouldn't assume blah blah blah.

You took the kind of approach to it I appreciate. "Blake shows up. They sit next to Weiss. Story continues." You establish their character in an efficient way that doesn't interrupt the story. This is good writing, and I am glad to see it.

Oh the aftermath happened here, l was really expecting it.

nice job!

(this comment is being written during the chapter reading, after the chapter l could pm if l want to comment morewow it really is slow burn but l can see some progress

This is amazing I can't wait for more to come out hope to see you then.

you are handeling this rather well. forming a basis for who they are and WHY. well done a d an interesting read.

Ooooh THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER till now, it was nice kind of fluff that awkwardness gave and the three of them was feeling for each other and not the love triangle kind of feelings. Not jealous thought that makes this chapter a bit suffocating or more drama. Weiss is badass eater with a ice hard pokerface. Blake is still a mystery which makes it even better and Yang is not as badaas as she thought, her flistrring makes me feel warm inside in another words happy. Thank you for this chapter

Nice chapter!

This continues to be one of my favorite fics out there. Like seriously if this keeps up and doesn't randomly go dark like pretty much all the other bees Schnees stuff goes, this will be my favorite.

It's Blake's turn next right? 'cus I slways root for the one who knows the other first. And I always root for Blake. It stills bother me what Yang said about Blake but also kind of did it. Don't trust strangers and then warning about some sexual advances and doing it herself with Weiss. I know that my review is very conflicting regarding to why I always think if it is good or not but I can't help it sorry for being confusing here but I can't help my feelings towards this fic. I am used to Blake being the middle person if you understand what I mean. But anyway yes I remember this is a slow burn so it also means that this fanfic is going to be long one, l am correct? Plz, plz Blake next.

Oohh I like the way you make Weiss think about others (aka. Nora) not only Blake and Yang like in most fics. For example she thinks about her hug with Nora and listening to her dream telling. It was a very sweet part of the chapter.