This was so cool, no one really talks about Super Danny and Fun Danny, so its nice for them to get the light too.

I rather liked it but where did their ability to care go. After all what made Danny a good person was empathy I guess it got lost between the two stuck in the think that split them in the first place.

I hate to do this, and it might be because I literally just watched the episode with Ghostwriter, but this kind of reads like that episode sounds. Very lyrical and it seemed to rhyme to me, but again the style might just be one the brain.

This was a nice characterization of the two Danny halves told in a way that was unusually interesting to read.

Oh, this was a nice view of what could have happened! Honestly, they are two sides of Danny, but two extremes. Without one side to temper the other...you get this. And you wrote this situation very well! Random question: do you know why Fun Danny had a mullet?

this is amazing! i love it!
is realy good how u described the flaws of each half, after all they are not a complete person