Love this so happy for the update!

Aaaahhh, the amount of First Men wank in here is beautiful. I look forward to more.

A fun fic so far, but the comming gains from this war seems quite unbalanced! The Winter and Isles will be one of the largest contributors to the fight, followed by the Dornish. As I understand it, the Dornish will get the southern parts of the canon Stormland, while the Starks will get nothing at all! This would give the Targaryens all the fertile lands in Westeros, plus the massive mining areas of Westerland and The Vale.

The Starks and the Martells would be insane to agree to this, even if they expect to get a friendly house ruling the central kingdom of Westeros. They would be well aware that things can change, and sacrificing countless men to gain others a kingdom is insanity.

A more equitable partition of the spoils should occur. The North could easily extend their border further south. The Red Fork would be a reasonable border that could be defended. Streach it west from Riverrun along the Tumblestones to the Pendric Hills and The Crag, and also to the east along the river and into the Bay of Crabs. For the North to get The Vale is logical, as there are quite a few First Men left there, and it is a natural border.

For Dorne, they should also get a more substantial reward. Splitting the south-east of The Reach, from south of Oldtown to north of Uplands, and also the to the northern foothills of the Dornish Marshes, along the mountanst to Shipbreaker bay, leaving the northern part of the canon Stormlands to the Targaryens. Dorne should also get the Stepstones. This way the three kingdoms would be somewhat comparable in size, even if the Central Kingdom would be most populous.

Good story so far.

Some minor typos (like soldier instead of shoulder) but overall it's a very good fanfiction. I hope you continue to update.

the spearwomen's name was ygritte? original much...
the spearwife daughter of the magnar beyond the wall. so he married his daughter and then let her marry a stark?

I love the worldbuilding and this chapter, I wonder what happens to ths tree of blackwood castle and the Isle of Faces

Glad to see you've updated. looking forward to more.

Very cool, looking forward to more, I'd thought you'd abandoned this but hoped otherwise. Stay safe

Interesante historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo.
Ya quiero ver como se van desarrollando ciertos temas de las familias reinantes en los próximos capítulos.

Nice

Interesting. Looking forward to how the conquest goes.

Geographical, not geological. Geology is the study of things beneath the earth (rock formations etc). Geography is the study of the earth and places on it.

I’m surprised you make rival for Wolf fang guard. I’m curious tho why the trainers from North would help Stanis? It strange that north would help strengthen south. After all they have no reason to do that...

I feel sad for Durandon. They seem likable.

So excited to see there was a new update for this story! Great chapter! I was wondering when the Mountain Clans of the Vale would become a part of the story! The make-up of the South has certainly changed from the original canon - in looking forward to seeing how that affects the Targaryen's conquest!