Who's the bigger gossiper, Vlad or Technus

ok. cool.

A little choppy in execution of events and kinda to fast pace. Maybe double check after finished writing a chapter? And slow down a bit. Other then that good job!

shouldn't they be trying to get out?

I really liked your story and how you wrapped up the ending. I like it when it takes longer for other characters to figure out danny's identity in fanfictions and you made me a happy reader. Thank you for writing this fan fic and I hope you have a wonderful day :D

It makes sense how it all comes together. I feel that it could use a bit more description though. The dialogue works, but without more being explained it kinda feels like the characters are running from scene to scene. I think I will fallow you because there's a lot of potential for improvement!

Fries please. I'd prefer my doom with fries.

DUH DUH DDUUUHHH
OH NO BLOOD BLOSSOM
JAKE DO SOMETHING
OH NO DOES THIS MEAN JAKE HAS TO gulp EAT THE FLOWERS? "OH MAN"
PLOT TWIST OF COURSE THESE ARE ONE OF THE SERIES MAJOR VILLIONS SO OF COURSE THIS WOULD HAPPEN
AWESOME

AWESOME
nice touch with spectre deflector

AWESOME
team American dragon and phantom team up
is danny going to reveal his secret too?
So far so good

love it.
great update.
wow.
I can't wait what happens next.

AWESOME
nice to see them bonding
will Jake know about danny's human side?
Can not wait for them to team up and fight back

OMG
AWESOME FANFICTION
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON

DUH DUH DDUUUHHH
PLOT TWIST

NO NO NO NO NO DONT VLAD HE IS A FRUITLOOP