Nice

I love this

I’m not really into betrayal dxd fics, but you did put a lot of work and effort into this, and did your best to make it original.

I’m curious about the “truth” part at the end of 24.
I have a theory that I honestly like to be true, but I wouldn’t be surprised if it weren’t.

please update I want see what Will be happen next

This is wild. So the dragons of Earth were part of a biological experiment with Trihexa being a fail safe if the dragons or something else got out of hand, like a nuke.
The only thing was who sent him out there and did they want him to find it so they get the information to recreate them or was there something more to the entire thing.

This chapter reminded me of the Hollywood Movie "Prometheus" almost same theory and and same confusing timeline.

I have a doubt.
The arc of DxD gonna show every PoV or just gonna be centered in your time line that you created when Issei "Left".
Waiting for the next chapter.
See ya.
P.D.: Why i read so fast. (Cry in the corner of his room)

for the sake of my own sanity I'm dropping this here.
jfc what a shitfic.

story so far: 2/10
Nigh unreadable and fucking confusing timeline.
Rewrite is a must.

I have a theory that without the RDE, the DxD Team implodes from the inside out. They will try to make due without Issei until they begin realizing the mistake of betraying him and realize it's too late. Overall, the best DxD Issei betrayal story I've read. Keep it up and keep it going.

Sorry, I'm late.
I haven't been able to buy myself time for it. You know College and All.
I loved the chapter btw, especially the the ending.
Keep up the good work, a little faster if possible.
Have a Great Day

finally, shes dead, hopefully, dont you bloody dare bring her back

Dude... you make me anxious man... I can wait for the end of this and the next arc. The most important to me is the one whit Issei/Verphis returning... that gonna be sick.

Very good job this is one of the best fics of issei being betrayed and it's also original not like others with all the same cliche BS andi got a question in that nightmare issei had the blue bitch chasing him came true so does that mean those other bitches also gonna show up? If they do at least give us the satisfaction of them getting their asses kicked and in one of the arc titles it says after the betrayed what do you mean by that isn't all this after his betrayal . Anyways keep up the good work because this is such a good story great job

I admit to confusion, at first I assumed he went to a different earth or something? But now it sounds like an alien world or something?