this is so good but i am always mad at omake bc i hope there is more XD

I am from the future and I really enjoy this story please can you continue this?

Hakuno Kishinami (Male) is much more suitable as the lead for To Love Ru than Shirou Emiya.

Furthermore you are totally wrong about Shirou's abilities and that Gaia weakens the Mystery and c.

Shirou's Projection (Trace Version) is much better than Gradation Air, as objects that are Traced last indefinitely unlike objects created by Gradation Air.

Rin: "…Fine. I guess if I'm going to correct you, we'll have to start with the fundamentals. But let's go back to what we were talking about earlier. Is it true that the thngs you projected are still in your shed?”
Shirou:“Yeah. Things don’t normally go away unless you break them, right?”

Gaia does not weaken Mystery and Magecraft, Mystery and Magecraft are weakened by The Human is not involved in any way with the weakening of Magecraft and Mysteries.

Gaia is the will of the planet to survive. Gaia protects all creatures on Earth. So Gaia does not care if Aliens and other beings from space come to the planet, as long as they are not a threat to the planet Gaia will not attack.

Of course Gaia hates humans, mainly because they became independent of the planet and humans will be able to survive even when the planet is dead. For that reason Crimson Moon appeared. This does not happen in FateExtraVerse, in that universe the planet never I ask for help from other celestial bodies.

Gaia obeys the laws of the most prosperous species on the surface of the planet, for that reason in ancient times when the gods, Phantasmal Species and other supernatural beings were at their peak, they were the ones who established the laws of reality.

Due to certain events that occurred, humans were allowed to not depend on the gods and the supernatural. Humans decided to be independent, trust science and their own knowledge, and advance as a civilization. And emerged the Human Order / Common Sense of Man

In this way the humans separated and were independent of Gaia, in this way Alaya separated from Gaia.

Thus began the change of power, as humanity advanced and stopped believing the supernatural and supernatural beings, supernatural beings lost power and that is why they went to the Reverse Side of the World in order to survive.

So if Gid tries to destroy the Planet then Gaia would send its Counter Force to stop Gid and if humanity disappears then that universe / timeline will be eliminated / pruned like the LostBelts.

In case you did not know there is LostBelts where the age of the gods still exists but those worlds / lines were eliminated by The Human Order / Alaya.

So unknowingly Gid condemned his entire universe to disappear, what a great king he was, but if you think about it, he and your Shirou are equally stupid, one for making his entire universe disappear and the other for endangering everyone planet only to protect a girl who was not really in danger.

Without a doubt it would be difficult to decide which of the two is more stupid.

I have to mention that Hakuno and Moon Cell are more suitable for the To Love ru universe than Shirou ... And I will keep waiting until someone decides to write a story like that

Huh so apparently this has already been improved by someone, can't say for sure how well they did so since there are still quite a few grammatical issues and reading it is quite awkward? I mean my own reading comprehension isn't that high but its like playing on 20 fps when you are used to 60 fps there are just some awkward jittering at times.

So yeah tl;dr good story riddled with the occasional misspelling and it doesn't quite flow from sentence to sentence, its nothing major but is kinda irritating but then again I'm horrible at my 3rd language and can barely write using it. So yeah all in all good shit.

Oh boi, you don't do that to someone who really looks like and acts like Sakura when Heavens Feel!Shirou is there.

Fun fact: in the Nasuverse Greece god are actually alien MECHA that came to Earth after their home world were destroyed. So Heracles can be counted as a demi-alien

About what Shirou going to do in the future, in fate hollow ataraxia it mentioned that he studied about law and if Shirou didn't get involved in the grail war he will become a lawyer

What a cliff. Please release more because is very well made.

-

why is your grammar so bad it was fine in chapter 1 and 2

grammar in this chapter needs work

update this story please

Thanks for the chapter but WTH author you don't leave a chapter in a cliffhanger for two years is this story even still going on please update again

Thanks for the chapter