you want us to blame someone else if this story dies someone who has no bearing on what you do who doesn't control you

i agree withI REALLY HATE EIRI YUKI you are nothing more then a story idea stealer

quitter

It is a shame that the idiot was bashing your story. I found it quite enjoyable and was enjoying narutos transformation as well. I look forwars to the rewrite

You don't have to read reviews ya know, just don't read hers.

I'll admit, knowing this might accidentally set you off even if it isn't my intention, that the story could be a lot better. Frankly theres not much that can be done in originality for the family neglection plot point that hasn't already been done.

But there were several points in the fic that just didn't make sense. The day after Naruto's first confrontation with his birth parents is one of them.

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I really like your story and I'm following you on wattpad

dear writer please make more chapters

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.

update pls

'Where did things go so wrong?'
omg
Bruh

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My only problem with the story is anti venom doesn't have a conscious

Just block them and write your story it's great. You shouldn't bother what others say, as long as you are satisfy with what you write it should be good. But damn I wished this was a updated.

honestly... how hard is it for Blackblood3464 to write a simple DISCLAIMER... stating that her story is based on Forgotten Venom. just write one sentence before the chapter and copy/paste it in each chapter... it wouldn't take five minutes to do that...

by not posting a DISCLAIMER, Blackblood3464 is OWNING the ENTIRE story as HER idea (wouldn't that be considered stealing?)

windstorm16 started writing his story "The Forgotten Venom" on January 10,2016 and last updated it last May 12, 2016, while Blackblood3464 published the story "The anti-venom Ninja" last October 6.

I know for some its such a trivial matter and that many people copy/write the story of others (especially in a free site like Fanfiction, AO3, wattpad, etc.) but still, we shouldn't throw away our morals simply because we are faceless in the cyber world.

I must admit the last review was cold... why? because i read the reviews and windstorm16 receiving a review of HER COPYING another's work... when I know that the ONLY POSSIBLE story that this person (u/6846387/arckane) is talking about is Blackblood3464's story.

I agree with UnsanMusho