the story is very interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.

I'm sorry...I don't want to bash this story but I have to say that it's quite honestly boring and tedious to read.

I just never understood why any Author would take the goddamned Naruto fandom if they want to write a thoughtful and patient main character. Especially given the setting of this story.

If you wanted to have a relativeley normal main character then why not take Jon Snow? Most evidence points towards the fact that he's the REAL Azor Ahai, the Prince that was Promised.

Which is one of the main complaints I have about this story. G.R.R.M set a perfectly fine lore for Azor Ahai, and the changes you've implemented so far just serve to undermine all that good, extensive, well thoughout lore with this Naruto.

Him being Azor Ahai feels cheap.

That and I hate the fact that you've decided to follow cannon and hold on to it like it's a crutch. Naruto playing the long-game or not, it's just tedious to read something I that I already know. Your other story was far more enjoyable than this one.

your story is a copy paste of the original series , you had some creation till chapter 2 max 3 , now it's just sad , hope you don't update this "original" story ever

hey buddy i really miss your history maelstron in westeros is a piece of art i really dont want to tkink the ovid afect you

Canon Naruto was the epitome of 'propriety' outside of the fantasies he had of Sakura before he officially began dating Hinata.

Even with his surge in fame and popularity with the multitudes of girls that threw themselves at him post Shinobi war, Sakura had to point it out to him in neon signs that Hinata liked him. In what world would he entertain a freaking harem? Authors who half-ass their characterization and don't even know their source material for the sake of mindless wankfests are downright annoying.

Please update soon I love this story

“Then” and “Naruto” are used far too much in fight scenes.
Also, at the end of this chapter, Naruto had dinner, with WINE, and he decided it was a good idea to start using pointy metal objects?

I hope you upload the next chapter soon

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Dang the mountain got more lives than a friggin cat, shame you didn't continue this it was just getting good

Dang is itachi gonna become daario? haha

bWAHAHA GO NED!

awww lady and the butcher's boy Lets hope Naruto can keep ned alive.

Dang I knew she'd die but ugh right in the feels.

Good stuff, hope you continue it