Your story sounds really interesting. I'm excited for a new chapter :)

'throwing through his veins'? Do you mean 'coursing through his veins'? Anyway, I am really happy that this chapter came up and now we get to see more on how magic users are really hunted. It is kind of strange that the Earl could confirm who had magic and who doesn't just by meeting someone for the first time. Really can't wait to read the next chapter soon.

Ah, a great start! And, of course, Allen would meet Tyki first. /chuckles/ Even though it was short, it really captures one's attention. I can't wait to read the next part! (Though hopefully, it'll be longer?)

There are alot of typos in this chapter so maybe you might wanna skim over it again and fix them other that great chapter~ Cant wait for the next one~ -Timcanpy

Well, the truth hurts, a lot. So Neah will appear in this fanfic, can't wait to read about that. All the mystery kept me wondering what kind of argument that lead to the hunting of his own family.

This is going to be the most exciting fanfic I am going to read. Allen just met two Noah: Tyki and the Earl. I really can't wait to read the next chapter soon. By the way, when you mentioned that there were fourteen powerful beings, does the Earl count and does Jasdevi counted as one or two beings? Anyway, great beginning. This story has a lot of potential.

Wow so the earl is the enemy of his own family?