This was very well written. I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes, but overall this was a very nice story.

I loved this!

Bill es despreciable me gusto el fic :)

Ugh Bill is so fuck up but why do I have to like him so much *cry cry*

I finally read a story that involves Ford's reaction to the note. Ever since I saw it on the Gravity Falls Animo, I got very curious as to how the Author would react to it, and this one works for me. Both Mabel and Ford felt like they're to blame for what happened to Dipper when it wasn't entirely their faults. (Most of it is on Bill.) I also do love the touching moment between Ford and his niblings. What a great story.

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I have been waiting like over a year to read a story where Ford finds out that Dipper got possessed by Bill in the worst possible way. I mean Bill used to be in and out of Ford's mind, but as far as we know he never played with his body the way he did with Dipper. It's totally not the same

This was very well done and an enjoyable read

Excellent job on this story! I see I wasn't the only one who was particularly struck by those pages in Journal 3. Love the emotions here.

This was very nicely done! :D