Um, well, THAT was super hot. Wow. Instant fave. I'll try and be more coherent than that but really that was literally all I could think throughout. I approve very, very much.

The beginning was great. I loved the way you blended the familial domesticity with the raciness of our favourite couple. Hurricane Jack is such a sweetie, and I have no doubt that John enjoyed his view very much. ;) I loved that Anna returned the favour by swatting him on the backside as well. Their playful banter is always one of my very favourite things in fanfics.

I'll admit, I've always had a kink for Anna and John playing a sexy game together, LOL (let's face it, I have far too many racy kinks for these two), so this was literally a dream come true for me. Like you have no idea. All of those items sound like a very good time indeed for our duo. No wonder Anna melted. And I can totally imagine her being unable to resist trying to sneak a peak at the "teasing" cards. She so would.

I think the temperature of the room shot up several degrees after imagining John's "stripteasing" antics. No wonder Anna was delighted with that. And I love that even when they're in the middle of something very naughty, the overwhelming love they have for each other is still there, evident in the way that Anna emphasised that he was the father of her child and therefore the sexiest man she knew, and of course John's enthrallment with how beautiful Anna was was just perfect. And those ice cube antics? Um, holy cow. This fic is the height of sexiness without being all out smut and the suggestiveness of it all just makes it hotter. Definitely can't blame Anna for not being able to take the teasing any longer (and I had to laugh at the image of John being pulled closer by the tie he still had around his neck).

And that ending! LOL! I definitely did not see that one coming, but it was a brilliant ending, very much in keeping with the lighthearted tone of the story and the wonderful relationship that Anna and John have. I can definitely see Anna wanting to "win" and what a perfect way to do so! Overwhelming John with sexiness and then striking the blow would be so her, and of course he would fall for it because he can't resist her.

I'm afraid there aren't enough words to express how much I absolutely adore this but I hope this review at least goes a little way to doing it! Love, love, love, love, love. I'll be rereading over and over and over and over (I hope you get the idea)...

Anna smacking John's rear... I loved it! Actually I loved the whole thing.

haaaa this was brilliant! :D :D love the ending! :D

Very nice!

So, so sexy and cute. I'd say we're all winners!

I love it how John is all hot and bothered by Anna cleaning up their son’s toys. Ahhh, the simple things in life. It seems Anna also gets overcome by the view. I think Banna are going to have a very romantic end to their evening. Now John knows where Anna’s limit is…hahaha she is ready to take what she wants from her studly hubby! Ice cube anyone? Thanks for the Banna fluff!

That was so cute...lol... Love the dad bod and she couldn't resist smacking him :)

This is possibly the best thing ever. Ever.

I so needed an angst vacation -thank you for delivering! This was a fun and sexy read.

Really good story, congratulations, i really enjoyed it