| Reviews for Teach Me How To Say Goodbye |
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RainingStarWars chapter 3 . 2/4/2017 Take your time! It's all good! As for this chapter... LOVE IT! |
LittleTeenAuthor03 chapter 3 . 2/4/2017 You are not the worst person on Earth, you are the beautiful person on Earth 3 *Don't give up! You're almost there! Also, nice chapter! I like Grace's development; I assume she's a bit lonely, like an introvert? |
MachUPB chapter 3 . 2/4/2017 Aw, don't put yourself down. I thought that was a great chapter, especially with whatever's going on in your life. You are not the worst person ever. Plus, I take AGES to update my stories, so I get that you can't always get chapters out when you want them out. (And the trivia... well I suck at trivia.) Cool chapter, I look forward to the next one. :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2016 Oooommmmggggggg moaaaaaaarrrrrrr pleeeeaaaaaseeeeee! |
MachUPB chapter 2 . 11/9/2016 Cool story. I'm intrigued to see what happens... and how Sans goes about getting the information he desires. I look forward to the next chapter. :) |
Zephyr169 chapter 2 . 11/6/2016 Ahhhhh I love it :) can't wait for the next chapter |
RainingStarWars chapter 2 . 11/5/2016 I'm laughing so hard! The PUNS! The beautiful puns! This is a great story, Disney! Grace and Zoã are awesome original characters and your writing is excellent! YOU MUST KEEP WRITING, ALWAYS! |
LittleSnaketail chapter 1 . 10/18/2016 Cool! |
LittleTeenAuthor03 chapter 1 . 10/12/2016 *deep breath* IS THE TITLE A REFERENCE TO HAMILTON? IF IT IS THEN I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE, DIS. Alright, just wanted to get that out xD Soooo... Sans and Papyrus magically got teleported into our world via magical science nonsense or something (really want to find out how tho ;) ) and Grace is an awesome OC. ... Seems legit. I like it! But some questions first that I pretty sure is going to be answered in later chapters: 1. Why does Grace call Zoa (can't do the line :/) "Zoa"? I'd imagine that Zoa is Grace's mom or am I just not getting enough information here via awesome story-telling? xD 2. ... Nah, it was just one thing on my mind xD I mean, other than- WAIT, I KNOW A SECOND THEORY 2. Was that Gaster talking? I know people usually make Gaster's text like that in stories but was that him? Possibly Error!Sans? *le gasp* Is this gonna deal with Multiverse shenanigans? Actually, probably not xD That's enough of my mindless rambling xD Nothing worth of feedback but pffft, you're good Dis, you're good. Just need to wait and see how things play out then. -Teen |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2016 This is SO GOOD! KEP WRITING IT PLEASE! |
RainingStarWars chapter 1 . 10/3/2016 AHHHHHH! It's so good! |