I want fanart of that last bit thanks-

AWESOME. More confidence-building, Keith and Lance bonding, and the last 200-ish words speak for themselves. That was adorable. 10/10. Onto the next one!

As Always,

Happy Writing~

Keith and Lance have like the exact opposite kind of friendship as Lance and Hunk, and it's hilarious. Nice to see some platonic interactions with them.

X'D Lance no XD lmbo
Keith does care, aww :3 These two are hilarious around each other tbh
*hands you a donut* :D Thank you for taking the time to write all of these awesome stories! :) You're really good at writing!

HA, classic. Thumbs up to the shopkeeper for putting up with painfully shy Lance! I never thought he could be so endearing when he's embarrassed (; but really though, I'm glad hes getting his confidence back, god knows he deserves it after that disaster

Lol - Only Lance would flirt with a girl that would want to literally eat him. :)

OH I LOVED THIS SO MUCH especially the ending! Oh I am crying with laughter! :D :D :D Oh, Lance, I love that kid. So much. And you write all the characters so very, very well - this was AMAZING! :D :D :D :D

This was so sweet! Everyone was written really well, and that ending made my day. I'm so happy to see Lance slowly but surely getting better, with his team still behind him 100%.

Nice start!

Remember to put Character Tags too!

Awesome writting: ) keep up the great work : ) also you use a lot of my vocabulary words including "commiseration" I always get a kick out of it when authors do that : ) : )

Aww! Cute! Love Hunk being a good friend along with Keith and Lance still misunderstanding each other sometimes. Wonderful job as always!

Heeeeheheheehe lol poor Keith shame he's not used to this XD loved this little piece!