Love it! keep it up I'm excited for the next chapter!
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Please do SasuNaru and when do you usually update? I'm sorry, I'm just curious because the story is just Soo good ;-;

I vote for her pairing with Sasuke, its not like you cant slowly build up their relationship although right npw its more like siblings. Although thats just me not really seeing Shikamaru with anyone else but Temari. Would also be interesting once the Indra and Ashura thing is revealed if you would add it.

Good work on this story!
It is one og the better ones om fanfiction
I Hope you Will let the chapters keep coming.

Its onoki, idiot

I really hope this story doesn’t turn into a Shikamaru x Naru story... I kinda signed up and read this far because I believed it to be a Sasuke x Naru story. It would be slightly disappointing if it headed in the direction of Shika and Naru

This is interesting and I am looking forward to reading more

I am hoping that Naruto will eventually be powerful enough to use her abilities and I'm hoping that having the 2 Hokage within her that they will help train her.

Determining how stop Naru is, is very difficult. At times it seems like she should be able to absolutely sweep opponents but then fights like the one with Darui happen and it seems like she had to give it her all. I get going 100% against Orochimaru but against someone as weak as Darui seems kinda odd. And the reason behind getting serious in a fight was kinda lame. She got mad cause he cut her hair off and it only made her angry because Shisui said it made her looks good...? I mean alright on a weird flimsy level sure I guess that can be a good motivation but if that was the reason all along then she should have gone 100% from the being to prevent this from happening in the first place. Not a flame or anything the story is great but this part threw me a little.

I think this story would have been great with no pairings at all but I see the forcing of Naru and Shikamaru. I recall reading in this last time that their fighting meshed well together but I can't see it at all. I like Shikamaru but he is just so boring all he does is try to think out things I would almost rather see her with Neji. Sasuke and Tenten would be cool. I hate the pairing of Sasuke and Hinata because of the whole double doujutsu thing. Why can't they just all be good friends and family as a kickass generation and just leave any possible pairing to our imagination for after the war and the story is over.

When she calls him Sasuke-san isn't it similar to calling him Mr. Sasuke? After years of friendship wouldn't it be fine just to call him Sasuke?

It would be cool if she had the same face marking that Tobirama had.

I’m really looking forward to more shikamaru x naru moments and their stories there’s too little of shikanaru

Author-san please fix the adjectives you use to describe Naru-san. First you describe her with silver hair and purple turning scarlet eyes. In the previous chapters you kept calling her blonde with cerulean eyes (in this chapter you called it blue orbs).

I really like this story... It's just the adjectives you describe Naru-san is so inconsistent. That it is grating my nerves like an itch...

Please fix it.

Love this story so much and I want this to be illustrated correctly in my imagination... love that shikamaru is her shipmate...

Author-san please fix the adjectives you use to describe Naru-san. First you describe her with silver hair and purple turning scarlet eyes... Yet you kept calling her blonde and then in this chapter you described her having