| Reviews for For she's the Raven, the daughter of Dragon |
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   Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 4 . 6/16 I'll wait for ya! |
| imagine.cosmos112 chapter 4 . 6/12 This is a very good story. I will be waiting patiently for the next wonderful chapter. |
| JadaLiburd chapter 4 . 5/17 I can't wait for this to continue. I'm laughing my head off. Can't wait for the LawLu! Stay Safe Author! |
| angelsXdemons chapter 4 . 4/26 Oh God. How could Dragon do that to Cyrus? I feel so, so, so sorry for him. Your story is really interesting, I hope you update soon! The Devil Fruit idea is really good too. |
| Kadek8785 chapter 4 . 1/5 Cyrus, do it! Poor Law if he has to do it XD By they way, I really love your story. Although I'm sad we don't have rubber boy/girl Luffy, I still enjoy it regardless. I hope you can continue it. |
| angeldunn1993 chapter 4 . 12/14/2019 Omg lol I can't wait for you to write more. |
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 4 . 12/8/2019 Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2019 Hi, I absolutely LOVE this story, I do hope you keep updating it. Thanks ALD |
| Kokoro chapter 4 . 9/18/2019 Update please! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/8/2019 More ! More! Shishishishi! |
| Vergil Leonidas chapter 1 . 8/9/2019 I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked this, but whatever I had thought of as I read the summary ended up being completely opposite. First of all, I like this Dragon, we really don't get to see that much of him in the manga so I imagine writing him could be difficult. The only thing that is kind of problematic is the danger Luffy would be in. But for the sake of the story I'll overlook that. New Devil Fruit sounds powerful but dangerous and you conveyed that perfectly in this chapter. As for bird of choice, I'm perfectly fine with that. I think I'll keep this one short and write a bigger review once I'm caught up, so all in all, I liked the chapter. |
| acetwolf94 chapter 4 . 5/27/2019 LOL! I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| Unlucky Alis chapter 4 . 5/14/2019 Oooooooooh my god, I love this story so much, so hilarious and amazing. I was wheezing so hard this chapter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/1/2019 So syluk. With all due respect, i've seen your reviews on some of my favourite stories (which makes me first assume that we have similar choices however a lot of the time im wrong), and frankly, im getting annoyed. By no means, am i trying to offend you or anything. Im trying to be honest. I just feel as if you bring some writers down and some of your reviews give off the vibe of "im a better writer so listen to my advice" - THAT KIND OF VIBE. There is a line between constructive criticism and outright arrogance. Please try to tone it down? Such an attitude, is not a good stance. Anyhow. if you need me to provide evidence to my view. Will do. P.S. no ive not read any of your stories.. |
| Daiiisy.B chapter 4 . 4/28/2019 I love this story already! I hope you update soon, it's been awhile |
