Next thor!

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Update a new chapter soon!

Me gusta mucho.

0_0 the dreaded cliffhanger. I can safely say you have amazing talent. And it seems I'm not the only one who's noticed. In all my dimension hopping travels I've constantly seem to come across a lot of the same. Though in some universes (like this one) there's always a select few that stands out. You have the honor of being Among those few.

The pace was on point, Gai was introduced, Kakashi is still the broken individual we all know and love, Naruto is the blonde ball of sunshine we can't help but follow, and Natsu is the ever amazing woman who actually took the time out care for Naruto.

I will be in another universe until the next chapter, which will automatically transfer me to this universe to continue my reading. :)

Sincerely,

Lost Soul and his trusty companion Neon

Really nice story! Thanks for that!

Story is going great so far. However there are a few spelling errors here and there. Not to worry though, I understand what you are saying. Also i feel as if you should try extending certain parts of the story, for instance, Natsu's explanation to Kashi. It's like beef stew. Just with barely any beef if you understand what im trying to say. Buuuut in conclusion thats all i haveto say. Next chapter I'll review again.

N.a.t.L.S
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R.i.P everyone