meh, i was thinking the same thing.

this was pretty great. :) thumbs up!

Love this!

Peridot has two hands

I can't believe I read the words "cockblocks" and "clothed tribbing" at work lmao. Anyway this is a great fic! I think you did just fine writing Lapis. She's kind of hard to write, I agree. I feel like there's more to her character than what we've seen on the show so far.

When Lapis was picturing Jasper instead of Amethyst, all I could picture was a tiny Jasper! Great little story by the way!

That was nice. I felt that it's how Lapis would react if she saw Amethyst and Peridot like that. The story flowed in context and everything matched up together. You should do more of these type of oneshots! :)

*Enjoys story*

*Reads NSFW Authors Note and Is Now Traumatized For Life*

You wrote Amethyst and Peridot good as usual but you did an even better job with Lapis and I'll be looking forward for the next time you use her in a story. You did great with her.

:O DUDE! THE NSFW PART! hahahaha
I loved this story :3 Great job :)

This was really well done. I loved how Lapis phased in and out of seeing Jasper and Amethyst.

Ah yes, drama. This is why I wake up in the morning.
But honeslty, great and VERY well written fic. I absolutely loved it. It's kinda sad that they weren't making out w/ each other when Lapis came in, but still