I'm a bit confused on what's going on between the MC's & the Irish, it doesn't feel very clear to me.

I was shocked about Opie & Cherry! I've never seen that in SOA FF! Total twist on that.

I didn't get why Jax was annoyed when Tara answered when he called. I loved her shock that her brother was in Ireland & now with Trinity.

Please update soon
Can't wait to see what happens when Tara learns about Darien and trinity
Well they return to Charming with Jax and Opie

This still says it was a video of the rehearsal.

Why do they call it CROSAM?

This whole chapter is just so much clearer to me with the added details, it makes everything make logical sense. I like that he told Trinity about his linage, his past friendship with Jax, & that Maureen is unaware that he knows about Jax. I also thought it made more sense to have the taping the day after the wedding instead of the day before. Great job.

I like that you said Darien went back to his mom's house eluding he's Tara's brother with her father, makes more sense.

I didn't remember that it had been at Gemma's insistence to give the Ashby's protection.

I found that ending was much more clear to me, especially knowing now what's to come as prior thus ending confused me in a future chapter. Did he always have a ponytail? I did not remember that, lol.

You had me until you said they wore their wedding attire to their rehearsal, it just doesn't seem plausible to me. A bride just wouldn't wear her dress for everyone to see the day before. I like where you were trying to go with falsified tapes, but this just didn't ring believable to me.

Good twist on another rat in the group, I hope they get them all out as this charter has too many. I like that he wants to stay in Ireland with Trinity.

I'm ready for more!

I felt like at the end of chapter 1 Darien seemed surprise to hear Jax was her brother, was arriving any day in Ireland, but this chapter said he knew for 2 months. Seems conflicting. Also if you're holding true to canon opies wedding was the day Jax got out of prison so Jax couldn't of been involved in whatever past action that opies eluding to. Now if you're not holding to canon (which I prefer) it's neither here nor there, lol.

I really like that the guys settled in the ring, & that Jax called him brother. I kind of wish that Tara was here for this family reunion. Is darien older or younger than Tara?

Ooohhhh great twist that Darien is Tara's brother! I didn't see that coming, & I like it. I think I e only read one other story with Tara having a brother, so this is very fresh. Is her her father or mother's son? I love that he's with Trinity when he had an issue with Jax & Tara, too funny. Though it sounds like he didn't know, I'm surprised she didn't tell her boyfriend she was John tellers daughter.

I like that you took into account he's on parole & had him make provisions. Too often FF forget these details that are really needed for a story to make sense.

I'm not sure why Jax wouldn't reach out to sambel before coming, going off of just Maureen's word doesn't seem like a good idea.

I'm wondering who has a score to settle to Jax that also hangs out with Trinity.