Reviews for It Ends At Dawn
OdamamaDeska chapter 47 . 7/14
Update plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz!
Gammily chapter 47 . 7/14
Absolutely love this fic! Can’t wait to see where it goes 3
Gammily chapter 23 . 7/14
“ None of them would ever know what the others were thinking in this moment, none of them would ever ask.” brb crying I fckn love this line and this entire chapter is so bittersweet
Akona chapter 47 . 7/7
Wow. Just wow. Absolutely stunned, heartbroken, in awe. So many different adjectives. What an interesting and original take on not only the reincarnation trope, but the "Akatsuki is raising a child" trope that I so love because the Akatsuki is so freakin disfunctional that watching them raise a child is hilarious and also downright heartwarming at the same time. You managed to create a wonderfully complex, nuanced character who inhabits the body of a child yet is so much more than a child, and you've captured the nuances of each Akatsuki's individual personalities, and this is the most realistic depiction of the Akatsuki interacting with a child that I've seen. Bravo, and patiently waiting for more 3
xxANIES chapter 47 . 6/29
Hooooooly crap. This has been really one heck of a ride and I’ve lived for it and cried for it. I love your writing style—to me it really conveys emotion and I have found myself crying stupidly hard during various moments. Sasori’s death, very much included. I bawled like a baby. The characterization that takes place here is extraordinary; most, if not all the character seem in character in my opinion. Thank you for this—you really made my day wit’s it. I’d love to see the end to her story; I really do hope she gets a happy ending with her family. (Even though I see that tragedy tag.)

The plot twists via Ino and Choji’s death were nice—it strayed from canon plot and hopefully this will allow her family to live-

If I may ask, are you able to update this in the future? If so, when? That would be AMAZING. All in all, this story has really reached out to me in so many ways. I really wish that Nanami can reach a happy ending with her family—even if it’s bittersweet.
KiyomiShizuru chapter 47 . 6/28
Omg so I have regretfully finished this fic I really hope a new chapter comes soon it has been an amazing ride it is so elegantly written and so much depth and beauty in every little word. The writing flows the personalities really shine
Nanami is a great character how her personality has developed with herself her abilities which while are unique no signs of Mary Sue. The love she feels for all her red clouds is so heart warming it’s. a joy to read.
Please teach me how to write so wonderfully. This fix is full of love passion but tenderness I know odd but that’s how I feel
I do hope that this is update and continues soon as I think I may be addicted
Love love love it
Awesomefoxes chapter 47 . 6/26
is this discontinued or not, just wondering because i really likes this book and wondering if this is going to be updated again.
berrybitch69 chapter 47 . 6/14
i fucking love this story... i hope to read more of this sometime. im so interested in nanamis and sasukes relationship, it is so different. and i want to hear more about her past, it seems like there is something hidden and i wanna knowww.
every character is so well written and feel super real. i love how well emotions of charecters can be felt. tho rip choji and ino
bee chapter 47 . 6/1
I know the last time this was updated was almost a year ago (i think?) But i just wanted you to know that i ABSOLUTELY love this fic and that i am wholly attached to it. The way u write it is so satisfying and the way the plot was going made me dissapointed to know that i already reached the end of it. Ive cried for at least five times now and i BAWLED when sasori died. Im not pressuring u to continue this but i wanted u to know that if u did, the boost of serotonin would prob last me a year even if it was only one chapter. Again, this fic is THE BEST
mynameisnotactuallyJeff chapter 30 . 5/30
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Guest chapter 47 . 5/16
Truly the best OC story on this site. You’ve really outdone yourself, I read it all in one sitting that’s how amazing this story is! Thank you so much for blessing us with story, it’s so heart wrenching and emotional and incredible. I cried when Sasori died and you wrote that scene where Nanami finds him so beautiful. I love her relationship with the characters from her fondness of Naruto to her fierce loyalty to the Red Clouds. Even more so, I love her as a character. You’ve written her so well and please don’t worry about her being a Mary Sue because I promise you explain her abilities so well that it’s impossible. She loves so deeply and is the perfect balance of the child she is and the deeper, more mature woman inside. I’m really excited to see how her relationship with Sasuke grows and to see what happens in Konoha. Thank you for this story!
TomRiddlesTwin chapter 47 . 5/13
Fantastic updates!
RachelLynnexx chapter 47 . 5/11
Oh my GOD let me tell you! Stumbling upon this story i definitely didn’t expect to come across the best SI (or the best PERIOD) Naruto piece i’ve read ever? Cant even begin to tell you which part i like best about IEAD: Nanami, her relationships with her red clouds, the ever evolving plot, or the new budding something-something with Sasuke! I absolutely can’t wait to read more and I’m bursting at the seams worrying about the Zombie duo’s wellbeing! In the meantime, stay safe and i can’t WAIT for you to update! Hopefully sooooon
Pistrix chapter 47 . 4/21
I found myself swallowing the whole story in less than 5 days.
I haven't read any fanfiction for a longer while, until I've stumbled on this one, reminding me of some great memories from childhood, when I tended to sit and read fanfictions for whole nights, not caring about approaching daybreak. This story reminded me of these memories I'm grateful for.
Your represtantation of Akatsuki's members is the best one I've ever read - each of them has unique personality, from loud Hidan, through rather relaxed Kisame, to not-so-easy-to-read Nagato. If Nanami didn't mention their names, I'm pretty sure I would be able to say who is who just from their way of talking and acting.
I enjoyed all little datails you've added. My favourite one is when Nanami found herself downstairs with Konan painting her nails. It was a little event, but containted that deeper meaning - Nanami might not be Akatsuki, but she belonged to them, just as they belonged to her. It was such a perfecty moment of bonding between her, Konan and Nagato. It just couldn't be better.
Despite I see there's already 6 months after last update, I do hope you'll continue this story at some point. I would be such a shame to abadon such memorable characters, with Nanami at the forefront.
But even if you decide something else, I wanted to thank you for one of the greatest fanfiction experience I could possibly get. It'll be difficult to switch to other stories now, waiting for this to continue, eventually.
Long story short, I do hope that when you stumbnle upon this comment, it'll be a little twingle of motivation to keep writing, because a lot of people like me are still waiting for next chapters. :)
nagi92 chapter 1 . 4/19
Hope you're fine, this story is amazing, I hope you'll update
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