This was cute, but Hermione's feelings were left ambiguous and while she hugged him and agreed to a "date" the lack of reciprocity in the levels of emotion left me feeling Harry is going to be hurt :-(

Very nice. This is a fantastic idea.

I do wonder though if Harry is emotionally capable of understanding his own feelings that way, canon-wise... He is truly a stunted person when it comes to expressing or accepting positive emotions... He is action oriented.

But I loved this story.

Ah, THIS is the kind of self-indulgent, semi-OOC (but in the best of ways, no worries) fluffy oneshot I can get behind! Also, thank you thank you THANK YOU for having Ron being genuinely supportive of Harmony and getting irritated at Harry for taking forever to tell his feelings to Hermione. I forever headcanon that if Ron never fell for Hermione, he'd be 1000% supportive of his two best friends getting together. Very lovely fic :)

Every time I read another of your stories I have a new favorite

Awesome. Keep it up!

It was nice and cute
I like the gimmick of the story was just Harry trying to find the words to say about his crush
Lovely Imagination

I LOVE ITTTTT!

CUTE... Its a good one love it... kudos

I love it. Actually reason the dictionary right in front of her trying to find the words that not only describe her but how he feels. So sweet and innocent. He can be such a lost little puppy sometimes.

This one was adorable. I think short stories are your forte. Imagination was your first story that I read and it was amazing as well. I then read your longer stories which I also enjoyed but I did notice that they didn't have the same impact as say this one, or imagination. I am really sorry if I come off as condescending which is really not my intention here. I myself can't put together a hundred words to save my life.

Anywho, thanks for sharing this work with us. It was a really fun read.

I love how you write them

It was cute but I hoped Hermione would return his feelings but it was nice nonetheless

*swoons* Harmony is sailing off! This was so cute, and I absolutely love the way that Harry told her how he feels about her. Very sweet!

And this is as realistic as it gets, because I can tell you now that my sister can relate to the whole I love you thing with her boyfriend xD

Adorable! Short sleuthing courtesy of Hermione Granger. I like how you portrayed their insecurities. And Ron is helpful here and stands his ground pretty well. Thank you :)