Fuck, this is so good. I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is just so amazing, I hope you update soon!

I loved this! I hope you write more :)

Hope you write soon!

This is such a fascinating concept to pair with the DGM setting and you did a fantastic job of it! I love the way you went about the game options etc

I love this story. I love it when people write their own original akuma. Yours is by far on another level. I like the SAO vibe this ability gives off as well. I like how you made Kanda be the one to explain everything. I appreciate how you took the time to recap the details of how Allen ended up like this. I like how Allen's still trying to figure out what's happening. I'm curious to see how this invitation thing will go down. This is a really unique story so I hope you decide to continue it.

Wow what a different concept for a story with these characters. I cant wait for you to update the story. By any chance do you know what a litrpg book is? Its one of my favoret genres. From your writing I know this is going to be fun.

lol, the fact you put 'swindler' in with Allen's abilities made me laugh. but anyways, this is very interesting! please do continue this. I'm very interested in whether or not it was a new level of Akuma or something/someone else.

Oooh~ This is so intriguing~ I'm hooked!

I know you've probably planned a ton of stuff out already, but I think it'd be cool that if, at some point, Neah helps Allen, whether it be out of selfish desire or a want to actually help.

Ooooo im getting SAO vibes from this~ Cant wait for the next chapter~

Super interesting, can't wait for more!