Glad Sherlock woke up, even for a few minutes. As for Mary, I don't see her as the villain. She's just more in control than John right now.

Poor John. :( I can't imagine how hard this is for him.

This is really good. :)

Great update! It was good to see John's pov of what's been happening with Sherlock. Sounds like things are going reasonably well... looking forward to the next update! :)

I really like this one! Please update soon

I like the story a lot so far and look forward to its continuation. Honestly I really do not like stories where we read the same thing again from another point of view, so I hope that as you said this will not be throughout the whole story. Oher than that: really good.

Great story so far! I sure hope Sherlock will be okay. I know how scary it is to have someone you love suffer through brain surgery ,because my daughter was diagnosed with Chiara 1 Malformation at six years old she is now thirteen ,and she has made great strides in some ways, but she still has learning delays, A.D.H.D. ,and she is on the autism spectrum so she will always have delays ,but she could have died from the Chiari 1 Malformation so we are very blessed she is still with us.

Fantastic! Need to read more asap please!

Amazing! I hope everything sólo be ok with him

Oh really good. Poor Sherlock thought. Hope you add another chapter soon!

wow...well done and you have a new follower!

This is interesting and I'll be watching out for more! I can relate to the situation a little bit- I've had brain surgery for a tumour - but a cyst and this scenario has so many awful elements all of its own! Must have been such a scary thing to go through.

Can't wait for chapter two

Hi great story so far ! I am scared for Sherlock though I sure hope he will be okay eventually. I know anything to do with the brain is very tricky, and anything could go wrong, and John knows that too that is why he is scared for Sherlock I cannot blame him.:(
Please keep this story going it is great! :)