Harry YOU like a girl who is trust worthy for a relationship yet YOUR OWN actions prove why she shouldn't give you even a chance. Teddy asking her to give Harry a chance after explaining their debauched ways (thinking hermione will be okay with his whoring ways) was beyond me. A girl asks him to sleep with her and he just says 'yes' and while he claims to have a crush on another girl. This is no different from cheating in a marriage. He's been hurt because of his sleeping habits and teddy doesn't want him to hurt again. Well teddy then he should have used his brain instead of his Jr. His hurt is the result of his own actions, it will also be the reason for his heart getting hurt and you can't blame it on hermoine if she rejects him for his past actions... But then again this is a harmony fiction so no matter how sadistic Harry is she is gonna end up with him.

Okaaaay. This aspect of Harry is in no way appealing to any extent despite his limited good qualities. A self respecting person like hermione knows her own worth and harry is not worth it. What is even worse is that he has a crush on her and yet he could still feel the urge to sleep with other women. He couldn't even bother showing sincerity for it by being faithful/loyal. I don't see how indulgence in sex can boost anyone's personality, if anything people will stay away from them. Your past doesn't define you but certain things of your past does define you which is held intimately to some people.

Please don’t listen Guest. I hate story author make hermione sleep with other people. Author always make hermione lost Her virgin to someone else before she get together with Harry so annoy.

Nice story. Just one suggestion, please don't make hermione a virgin in this story. It's a turn off when you find out one goes around sleeping because they can't keep it in and the other a pure hearted sacrificial masochist.

This story is very interesting! I love fanfics when acts like the Marauders. Please update soon!

This is really good. Please update! This is keeping me sane during quarantine!

This is quite an interesting story! I am looking for more! Take your time to write and upload it! Stay Safe!

So Harry and teddy are adopted siblings here or does Teddy live with his mom?
Wish to read more on the others. It would be interesting for Teddy to be gay

So excited you’ve decided to continue this!

Thank you for continuing this story man! Loving it so far!

wow... looking great... please update quickly...

Nice job! Hope you wrap it up soon!

It’s such a shame this story isn’t finished. It’s a nice little read.

Hello I don’t normally post reviews but for this I had to(I’d PM you but don’t have an account). This story is adorable and makes me really happy. I love the connections of using James and Lily’a story for H/HR. I’ve noticed that you’ve been updating your other stories and if I may: please do consider picking this back up again even if only for a chapter or two to wrap it up. I’m not a writer so I’ve no clue how much work this would entail(I imagine a lot) but do know that there is at least me who’d be super excited to see this finished! Also for your grandfather: even if he doesn’t see you published, I like to think they know- that’s all that keeps me going sometimes. Either way whether you finish this or not(please do) GOOD LUCK whatever you do will be great.

I love this story! Keep it up! I really interested to see how everything unravels!