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Great story.

I do hope you get back to writing this...it is going fairly well.

Are you going to update this?

Aw...Tails Doll sounds ADORABLE here! Like a demonic Punisher! So...like Ghost Rider!

Omake: About a week or two later Hermione was grooming herself while looking a mirror, had a Disney Snow White moment', and uttered the phrase: "Magic Mirror on the wall Who is the Fairest one of all?" To Her surprise the question not only received a vocal response, but also a visual one when Harry and Td appeared and Exclaimed: "You are, Hermione! Did you miss us?"

that was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more:)

...underwhelming

Yeah you need to fix up this mess of spelling and grammar.

Somebody find this author a beta reader.
Also, could you remove the ANs about the poll? They really break what little imersion there is.

It’s not fixed sorry to say

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I love this but I was wondering: Once you go over the chapters and edit/fix the errors (Which I can still read and the two other chapters from not being part of the official story gone), I have a suggestion: What if the “Stone” as Harry grabbed it, restored not only him to grow at his true age, but indeed make him stop at seventeen, but restored the rest of the .EXE Characters while allowing them to keep their abilities from ’s ways; Even the guy himself? I figured that their original world was destroyed by something other then that; which is why they were in the Mirror World in the first place to begin with.

Also imagine if you added the other CreepyPasta Characters alongside other horror icons that would be interesting to meet for ... Maybe a secret sister?

Anyways those are just Suggestions, but other then that: I hope for more and wish ya luck as well; Good luck and not bad on anything.

that was a great chapter and I can't wait for more:)

*coughs*edit please*coughs*