This is getting similar to drumline if i remember correctly

To that guest somewhere below me, pls do not force your religion and worldview into other people. While I myself have no problems with religion, it only really irritate me when you lot force your opinion to people while standing lofty in your self-raised pedestal. I’m sorry if my words offend you but I hope you learn that different people deal with life differently. How the characters act in the situation doesn’t reflect what you think they should do as they are their own characters. What they might find as solutions to their problem can be different from how you find yours from your god.

Beatiful short, best of luck with all of your stories and happy new year, sauronx.

Im not even an American but still I want to enter this history lesson. Anyway good story

This is a terrible ending you can change if you are a Christian you know that any one can change with God on your side just ask him to give you his wisdom and eat from the tree of life and you will be happy. This is from one Christian to another if you are one if not I hope I did not offend you. Remember iron sharpens iron. Maybe Jaune will meet a man that can help him be a better man.

One this was a cowardly way out for Jaune two you want to know about suffering look at job in the Bible he lost everything Jaune could be better than this because he deserves to be happy because God dose not forsake his servants Jaune must be better than what he is in that letter.

Make sure to label this fic “complete”, that way people won’t bother you about writing more chapters.

Other than that, fitting end. With all the angst, I couldn’t picture it with a happy ending. A little too depressing for my tastes, but it’s real and that’s what drew me in.

Nice job.

Damn, this ending, while it feels like it should be ambiguous, the implications don't seem all that good. Still, glad to see you back to posting!

Definitly an ending kinda in the air, but i can see it happen in a way, self blame is downright terrible and i know something about it. Trough, please, tell me he didn't rape/kill or harmed Ruby and Summer in a way so grave. Best of luck with everything, i hope you'll return soon on Shattered memory.

What the fuck! I fucking love this story and you just up and do this? After so long? Whyyy?
Dramatics aside, please do something man . Things were really looking up last chapter and then it's like you decidedOh it's been so long and the readers wanna know what happened further? Well fuck you muwahahaha!"

Friend, don't play with my heart like this. That's not fair.

THROUGH THE NAZI LINES.
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You did good with this chapter. It is always hard to take into account all religions or no religions so as not to offend readers but it seems like these days everyone is searching for things to be offended by. I feel that it is because they are miserable and you know misery loves company. Anyway, keep it up. I would challenge you to not apologize for your faith. Present it. If you loose readers you loose them. You will probably never know but the faith ideals you add may bring someone closer to God and isnt that what we are commanded to do anyway? Be confident and joyous in your ability to reach others even on a silly thing as this site. Keep up the good work. Cheers!

What a great chapter, got to say i got the chills when reading the part from raven's view and i think your portraying the teligious/faith aspect well. Cant wait to read next chapter and good luck handling the flu/cold.

Step by step indeed friend! Faith has been so valuable to me lately and I’m glad it’s valuable to you too.

Great chapter as always. I’m glad you’re still writing.